hi, plz help

[ikiichan]

The following sentances, is it correct?

The strength of one’s motivation to achieve success depends on one’s personality

If I say:
"One's personality will affect the strength of the motivation of being success "
would it be the same??

thanks~!

[Rusty]

The following sentances, is it correct?

The strength of one’s motivation to achieve success depends on one’s personality

If I say:
"One's personality will affect the strength of the motivation of being success "
would it be the same??

thanks~!

The strength of one’s motivation to achieve success depends on one’s personality. (OK).

If I say:
"One's personality will affect the strength of the motivation of being success to be successful. "

[ikiichan]

thanks Rusty