These days internet is my best friend. And google is my best guide. Probably, I thought a very little about loneliness earlier. I am born and brought up in a small town of Assam, which was surrounded by a large number of villages. So, I had a touch of village life also. About my family , it is really a happy family. Actually, I spent my childhood in a joint family. But further due to several reasons like varriations in work stations our family began to live separately. But whenever we get time or in any occasion we all gather together. I was the most loving and darling child of the family. With the passage of time , I have many friends since childhood. There was not a single day passed that I was alone.
I went to visit my hometown last week to refresh myself and to meet my own people. The trip was a successful one indeed but I became more melancholic. After marriage I have a great realization of the love of my parents and other family members. Their love could be so precious I had never thought before. Because I was never so away from them. My old granny, she still loves me like a little child. Eventhough I began to start earning, I am a poor person before her. She is almost blind and her age is about 99yrs but still she bears in her heart that she should give money to her grandchild to buy chocolate. As every one was so happy to see me after long , I got busy with them. Then it was the time to leave but when I was about to cross my gate a feeling came in my mind that i forgot to hug my granny. Everyone was in so hurry that they made me hurry too. I just gave a repeated glance by turnning back again and again to my granny who was sitting in baranda.
I have married the person I love. And I am very happy and lucky too. But something is lacking in my mind which creats a great vaccuum in my heart. I know the rule of nature is very harsh but it can be so harsh , I never thought. May be this place is new and alien to me today but someday I believe it will become as lovlier as my place in Assam.
These days internet is my best friend. And google is my best guide. Probably, I thought a very little about loneliness earlier. I am born and brought up in a small town of Assam, which was surrounded by a large number of villages. So, I had a touch of village life also. About my family , it is really a happy family. Actually, I spent my childhood in a joint family. But further due to several reasons like varriations in work stations our family began to live separately. But whenever we get time or in any occasion we all gather together. I was the most loving and darling child of the family. With the passage of time , I have many friends since childhood. There was not a single day passed that I was alone.
I went to visit my hometown last week to refresh myself and to meet my own people. The trip was a successful one indeed but I became more melancholic. After marriage I have a great realization of the love of my parents and other family members. Their love could be so precious I had never thought before. Because I was never so away from them. My old granny, she still loves me like a little child. Eventhough I began to start earning, I am a poor person before her. She is almost blind and her age is about 99yrs but still she bears in her heart that she should give money to her grandchild to buy chocolate. As every one was so happy to see me after long , I got busy with them. Then it was the time to leave but when I was about to cross my gate a feeling came in my mind that i forgot to hug my granny. Everyone was in so hurry that they made me hurry too. I just gave a repeated glance by turnning back again and again to my granny who was sitting in baranda.
I have married the person I love. And I am very happy and lucky too. But something is lacking in my mind which creats a great vaccuum in my heart. I know the rule of nature is very harsh but it can be so harsh , I never thought. May be this place is new and alien to me today but someday I believe it will become as lovlier as my place in Assam.
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These days Internet is my best friend. And Google is my best guide. Probably, I thought a very little about loneliness earlier. I am was born and brought up in a small town of Assam, which was surrounded by a large number of villages, so, I had a touch of village life also. About my family , it is really a happy family. Actually, I spent my childhood in a joint family. But further more recently, due to for several reasons like variations in work stations our family began to live separately. But whenever we get time or in for any occasion we all gather together. I was the most loving and darling child of the family. With the passage of time, I have many friends since childhood. {I can't tell what the previous sentence was supposed to mean. Maybe one of: "Even as time passed, I kept many of my friends from childhood," or: "From my childhood on, I have always had many friends."} There was Not a single day passed that I was alone.
I went to visit my hometown last week to refresh myself and to meet my own people. The trip was a successful one indeed but I became more melancholic. After marriage I have a great realization of the love of my parents and other family members. Their love could be so precious I had never thought before that their love could be so precious, because I was never so away from them so much. My old granny, she still loves me like a little child. Even though I began to start earning, I am a poor person before her in her eyes. She is almost blind and her age is about 99 yrs years, but still she bears in her heart that she should give money to her grandchild to buy chocolate. As everyone was so happy to see me after so long , I got busy with them. Then it was the time to leave, but when I was about to cross my gate a feeling came in my mind the thought came that i I forgot to hug my granny. Everyone was in so such a hurry that they made me hurry too. I just gave a repeated glance by turnning turning back again and again to my granny who was sitting in baranda on the veranda. {That last correction was just a guess.}
I have married the person I love. And I am very happy and lucky too. But something is lacking in my mind which creats a great vaccuum in my heart. I know the rule of nature is very harsh, but it can be so harsh , I never thought it could be so harsh. May be Maybe this place is new and alien to me today, but someday I believe it will become as lovlier as my place in Assam. {The underlined part in the previous sentence isn't right. I'm not sure what you meant; it should be either "as lovely as" (=the same) or "even lovelier than" (better).}
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-- Your first sentence was an interesting approach, but it didn't tell me what your essay was going to be about. After reading it, I expected to learn about the Internet, so it took me a while to figure out what the real topic of your essay was. A more relevant introductory sentence might be something like:
- My current life in the city is very different from what it was when I was growing up.
Then you could follow with the sentence about the Internet and Google.
Hi! Pete
Thanks for being my guide. I get an engouragement to write more.
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