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[Anonymous]

Please check these and post it back at the earliest

1.When you know you can't access or send sms when you go to kulim(hello teacher, this is name of a place), why you didn't inform me before you go.You are doing the same mistake again and again esspecially on sundays.That's why I always complain about your irresponsibily, I know I don't have any right to interfere in your personal matters as you said once.Though you are not concernd about me , I am very much concerned about you, so do inform me in prior whenever you go somewhere where you can't receive or send sms.I don't mind even if don't send sms or email unnecessarily or when you are busy with your work.But do send sms when it is really needed.( suggest better one)

Thanks a million.

[Pete]

Please check these and post it back at the earliest

1.When you know you can't access or send sms when you go to kulim(hello teacher, this is name of a place), why you didn't inform me before you go.You are doing the same mistake again and again esspecially on sundays.That's why I always complain about your irresponsibily, I know I don't have any right to interfere in your personal matters as you said once.Though you are not concernd about me , I am very much concerned about you, so do inform me in prior whenever you go somewhere where you can't receive or send sms.I don't mind even if don't send sms or email unnecessarily or when you are busy with your work.But do send sms when it is really needed.( suggest better one)

Thanks a million.
-- First, when a period comes before a new sentence, leave a space after it.

-- I moved your sentences to new lines just to help me correct them. They were fine in a single paragraph.

1. When you know you can't access or send sms when you go to Kulim(hello teacher, this is name of a place [So you must capitalize it!]), why <strike>you didn't</strike> don't you inform me before you go?
>You are <strike>doing</strike> making the same mistake again and again, especially on Sundays.
>That's why I always complain about your irresponsibility.
>I know I don't have any right to interfere in your personal matters, as you said once.
>Though you are not concerned about me, I am very much concerned about you, so do inform me in <strike>prior</strike> advance whenever you go somewhere where you can't receive or send sms.
>I don't mind even if don't send sms or email unnecessarily or when you are busy with your work, but do send sms when it is really needed. ( suggest better one) [This sounds ok.]