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tessandre
07-26-2008, 09:44 PM
Can someone check my sentences? Thanks again!!!

I just wanted to remind you that I will be taking 2 days off next week.
I will use my floating holiday on Monday and no pay on Tuesday. Would it be possible to make up the time for Tuesday? for at least 4 hours? (2 hours on Wednesday & 2hours on Thursday).

Thank you,

Rusty
07-27-2008, 08:54 AM
Can someone check my sentences? Thanks again!!!

I just wanted to remind you that I will be taking 2 days off next week.
I will use my floating holiday on Monday and no pay on Tuesday. Would it be possible to make up the time for Tuesday? for at least 4 hours? (2 hours on Wednesday & 2hours on Thursday).

Thank you,
The sentences are OK. Your boss should understand your suggestion.