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Anonymous
06-07-2004, 10:11 PM
Dear Teachers,

could you please check the following for mistakes for me


(The ship is still being held by the authority and did not sail
from the port yet.

there still be some legal cases against the ship owner and
the lawers names that are taking on the case are :

AND I MENTIONED THIER NAMES


many thanks

Pete
06-10-2004, 06:46 PM
Dear Teachers,

could you please check the following for mistakes for me


(The ship is still being held by the authority and did not sail
from the port yet.

there still be some legal cases against the ship owner and
the lawers names that are taking on the case are :

AND I MENTIONED THIER NAMES


many thanks
The ship is still being held by the authority and has not sailed
from the port yet.

There still <strike>be</strike> are some legal cases against the ship owner; the
names of the lawyers that are taking on the case follow:

AND I MENTIONED THEIR NAMES