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tessandre
10-12-2008, 09:51 PM
This is my unforgettable experience, starring in my first movie with my favorite actors. After this movie, I did two more movies with different actors inside the dance club at the same place. My co workers and some of the customers said that I am a movie star now that I don’t need to work as a waitress anymore. I got comfortable of being in the movie that I was not nervous or embarrassed about it anymore.

Did I use too many repetitive words? (movie) how can I change it?

Thank you again.