Improve our writing

[khadija]

Hi
I am student in the Univrsity I study english.
I study (Ineractions 2) reading, writing, grammar, listening and speaking.
I love all them but I enjoy writing,so I will writing here usually.
I hope to correct my mistakes if you see it. Grammar or spelling.
I think will be agood think to improve our writing
your friend
khadija:)
(I.L.E)

[khadija]

Hi, wardaa
I look forward to seeing you
your friend
:)Khadija
I.L.E

[saleh006]

Hello my brothers;
I am saleh, i'm here to see you.
I'm study computer engineering in the University.
And i think i can improve my language by share in this website.

[Wardaa]

Dear friends,

I welcome you all from my heart and I will be more than happy to help you with any thing you want.

Khadija my friend I eddited your massage as you requested. Here it is:
"Hi
I am a student (at) in the Univrsity I am studying (E)english.
I study (studied) (Ineractions 2 course) which included reading, writing, grammar, listening and speaking.
I loved all of them, but I enjoyed writing,so I will (write)writing here usually (wrong position of the word)
I hope (if you) to correct my mistakes if you see any grammar or spelling mistakes.
I think (it)will be agood think(thing) to improve our writing
your friend,"

I hope you know now what mistakes you are making and please let me know if you have further questions.
As you said we will be learning all together. BUt my dear freind if you do not feel confortable with this, you can email me and I will help you.

Your friend,
Wardaa;)

[khadija]

Hi, wardaa and every one
Wow, this very wonderful to find friend like you.I learned a good. I dont know how to thanke you. you have a good english so, I cant help you I sorry:o
I am pleased to write on this forum. I want to help everyone. I would like to see happiness and smile on every face.
Next time, I wiil write about my story with english.
your friend
Khadija
(I.L.E)

[Wardaa]

Hi, Khadija and all my friends,

I am glad that you learned something. Never mind my dear. We are all learning from each other.

What you are doing is also important for all members of this forum. We're glad to have you as friend.

Wardaa :)

[khadija]

Hi,my friends
How are you?
Actually, I wanted to write about my story with english when, how and why I learn english . But I am exhausted. I woke up at 5,30 a.m and I come back from the University at 3,00 p.m. Also, I want to get ready for tomorrow lessons.
I hope to tell us about your stories with english.
your friend
khadija :)
(I.L.E)
Thank you wardaa I feel encouraged

[Antoine012]

Hi All!

11 Ways to Improve Your Writing.

1: Begin with one grain of sand.
2: Give the who, what, when, where, and why.
3: Step up to bat and take a few swings.
4: Adopt a plain writing style.
5: Keep it short.
6: Give the reader a map.
7: Be active.
8: Cut unneeded words and prune windy phrases.
9: Watch out for these four commonly misused words.
10: Stress benefits, not features.
11: Give your writing the conversation test.

[Wardaa]

Thanks for your steps. That was helpful. We are looking for more

Wardaa

[Pete]

The list of writing hints given earlier appears to be the contents list of an informative article at the following address:
> http://www.editorialservice.com/11ways.html

You can go there to see explanations of the hints and examples of their use. One of the things you will find there is exactly which four words are the ones that suggestion "9" mentions.

[khadija]

Hello ,my friends
Thanks for this valuable information. I also learned at the University, if we want to improve our writing must
1- Use simple and easy vocabulary
2-Divide your thoughts into short sentences(write short sentences)
3-Do not worry about grammar but try to avoid any misspellings.

Hi , wardaa
How are you.
Did I improve my writing?What do you think?
I look forward to seeing you....
your friend
Khadija:)
(I.L.E)

[kayanat]

How can we rate our writing skills? Ours standard? If we can improve or not?I would like to write short stories or simple plain interesting things that happen, in a magazine. But I know it is difficult to get a chance or write in commanding language. how can I improve?

[khadija]

Hi, kayanat
Do not worry about this(all numbers started with zero). You can start writing here like me . You can write about anything. we will work together even we improve our writing.
I look forward to seeing you again....
your friend
Khadija:)
(I.L.E)

[khadija]

Hello my friends,
I am very glad because I am writing to you and I want to hear your opinions.
I think all the english skills are coherent. When I want to write I need to read and when I want to read I need to listen what I read and at the end I have to speak. And all need to practice. Here, the problem there is not anyone who can speak with me.
cheers
your friend
khadija:)

[khadija]

Hi wardda and all my friends.
How are you?
Where are you ?I am excited to see you
see you soon
Your friend
Khadija:)
(I.L.E)

[ghoti]

I feel I must add a comment here. To check any of your grammar etc., you really need a native (or near native) speaker of English to advise you otherwise you may be advising incorrectly. Unfortunately, there are few native speakers with time to spare who would be willing to do this.
I have seen a post by "dead rose" who wanted 30 pages to the checked. How long do you think this would take? This would take me far too long for me to be interested in doing it.
If you are going to correct someone's work, you need to be correct yourself. Wardaa, I think you are genuinely trying to help. Unfortunately you, yourself, have also made several errors in your corrections of the post. It is a case of "the blind leading the blind".

I would suggest to any who is posting a message that they read and re-read several times what they have written. In this "thread" alone, there are too many basic mistakes being made, which with a little thought could be avoided.