Pleas, correct this sentences

[khadija]

Hi
Pleas, correct this sentence
There are many people who think positively but less of them who Seeks to achieve that and least of them who make the success and reach their goals.
Thank you
your friend
khadija:)

[OddThomas]

There are many people who think positively but less than that who seek to achieve and even less of those who are successful and reach their goals.

[khadija]

This wonderful
Thank you so much:)

[Marius Hancu]

Simpler, IMO:

There are many people who think positively but fewer who seek to achieve and even fewer who are successful and reach their goals.