julius
04-22-2009, 08:46 AM
Q1:
will anyone do me a favor to revise the artical below?
That will help me a lot for my translation exam.Thanks a lot.
From the recorded its own history, America, in most time, is a country of speedy and chaotic life whose people are keen on innovative ideas and escaping of conservatism.
The optimistic characters are on its people’s veins which leading them to the achievement of personal ability of conquering difficulties.
Not everyone immigrating into America shouldering with a lofty cause. Since the time of colonization, some were for business’s sake except for religion.
During the19th century, some for escaping of army servitude were the sole reason for immigrations.
But, as for the progression of the increasing immigration as it were, most Americans still would not be hardly felt upon which its meaningful influences have lighted unutterably.
Connected with the European cultures, none of a nation would so much be acutely conscious of the independence out of Europe was a must than America did, which seems to be more civilized than the continent.
Q2:
Directions: In each of the following sentences there are four underlined parts.please identify the part that is grammatically incorrect.
Do please help me out this.1. We advised him giving up smoking and to do a lot of exercises.
2. If the policeman would have arrived earlier, hewould have seen the accident.
3. Malnutrition is a major cause of death in those countries where the cultivation of rice has impeded by recurrent drought.
4. The people along the river survived the recent flood without scarcelyany serious casualties or loss of property.
5. Most mammals to maintain a relatively constant body temperature, regardless of what the air temperature might be.
And this one:
1. You talk about it as if it were a grammar school instead of a leading university.
A. very large
B. very serious
C. very prestigious
D. very fundamental
PS: If you can point out the detail of errors you've found out,please be good to let me know in a explanative full way.
谢谢! I come from Jiangxi,China.
will anyone do me a favor to revise the artical below?
That will help me a lot for my translation exam.Thanks a lot.
From the recorded its own history, America, in most time, is a country of speedy and chaotic life whose people are keen on innovative ideas and escaping of conservatism.
The optimistic characters are on its people’s veins which leading them to the achievement of personal ability of conquering difficulties.
Not everyone immigrating into America shouldering with a lofty cause. Since the time of colonization, some were for business’s sake except for religion.
During the19th century, some for escaping of army servitude were the sole reason for immigrations.
But, as for the progression of the increasing immigration as it were, most Americans still would not be hardly felt upon which its meaningful influences have lighted unutterably.
Connected with the European cultures, none of a nation would so much be acutely conscious of the independence out of Europe was a must than America did, which seems to be more civilized than the continent.
Q2:
Directions: In each of the following sentences there are four underlined parts.please identify the part that is grammatically incorrect.
Do please help me out this.1. We advised him giving up smoking and to do a lot of exercises.
2. If the policeman would have arrived earlier, hewould have seen the accident.
3. Malnutrition is a major cause of death in those countries where the cultivation of rice has impeded by recurrent drought.
4. The people along the river survived the recent flood without scarcelyany serious casualties or loss of property.
5. Most mammals to maintain a relatively constant body temperature, regardless of what the air temperature might be.
And this one:
1. You talk about it as if it were a grammar school instead of a leading university.
A. very large
B. very serious
C. very prestigious
D. very fundamental
PS: If you can point out the detail of errors you've found out,please be good to let me know in a explanative full way.
谢谢! I come from Jiangxi,China.