Daily:What did I do today?

[khadija]

Hi all friends,
How are doing today? I hope you are fine.
What did I do today?
I woke up early because I have 2 mid-term exam are writing and reading.
I reviewed my lessons until 9:00 a.m then I went to the university.
I took grammar lecture for 2 hours after that came reading test time but
fortunately,the teacher apologized for the test. we were very happy.
For this, I had enough time to review the writing.
Surely, I tested in the writing. It was not bad.
Finally, I went back to the house at 4:30 p.m
and now as you are seeing I write to you.
I hope to hear from all of you ,too


Have a nice day
your friend
khadija:)

[xiakgoi]

Hi all friends,
How are doing today? I hope you are fine.
What did I do today?
I woke up early because I had* 2 mid-term exams* on* writing and reading. I reviewed my lessons until 9:00 a.m then I went to the university.
I had a* grammar lecture for 2 hours and after that came reading test time but fortunately,the teacher apologized for the test. we were very happy.
For this, I had enough time to review the writing.
*Surely, I tested in the writing. It was not bad.
Finally, I went back to the house at 4:30 p.m
and now as you see* I write to you.
I hope to hear from all of you ,too


Have a nice day
your friend
khadija

*- because the rest of your sentence is in the past, this must be too.
*- you had 2 midterm exams, therefore 'exams' must be plural.
*- the verb 'are' doesn't work here, and you should use 'on'
*- if you were talking about a general grammar lecture, you would say 'had a'. however, if your actual class is called Grammar Lecture, then it would be appropriate to say 'i took,' but then it would need to be capitalized because it is a proper noun.
*- i'm not quite sure what you are talking about here when you say "surely, i tested in the writing."
*-technically "as you are seeing" is correct, however it is much more common to say "as you see." try saying that instead of "you are seeing."

:)

[Wardaa]

Hi freinds,

I would like to share this one with you. I'm a bit angry while I'm writing this probably it will help or relief me from what I am suffering.

Here is it's the summary:

Imagine that your're at your training and you're a graduate student. Your supervisor or senior did not let you do anythng, and he prevented you from helping others in the same place where you're getting your training, and you 're supposing to work and cooperate with other workers; you need to submit reports for each visit to your professor at the University.
what would it be like?!!!
I woke up very early in the morning hoping this day gonna be different, but I'm doing nothing there except sitting and watching. This is not a real training. Any way, sorry for bothering you all with this. I'm also, having other trainings beside this one.

I hope next time will be something enjoyable to read.

With regards,
Wardaa

[xiakgoi]

Hi friends,

I would like to share this one with you. I'm a bit angry while I'm writing this and it will probably help to relieve me from what I am suffering.

Here is a summary:

Imagine that you're at your training and you're a graduate student. Your supervisor or senior did not let you do anything, and he prevented you from helping others in the same place where you're getting your training, and you 're supposed to work and cooperate with other workers. You also need to submit reports for each visit to your professor at the University.
what would it be like?!!!
I woke up very early in the morning hoping this day was going to be different, but I'm doing nothing there except sitting and watching. This is not real training. Anyway, sorry for bothering you all with this. I'm also having other training besides this one.

I hope next time it will be something enjoyable to read.

With regards,
Wardaa

:)

[Wardaa]

Hi xiakgoi,

Mnay thanks for correcting my common mistakes that I usually make. It's good to see someone is reflecting and giving you a feedback. Keep it on and thanks agian for your help and time.

Regards,
Wrdaa

[Cute Girl]

hello every body .....

iam very happy because there is some one who correct our mistakes here ..

so, firstly i want to thank you very much for your effort ...

and i want to share you this nice topice......


What did I do today?

i woke up at nine o'clock , i revised some lessons in Arabic subject then i had the breck fast ....

after that i prepared to go to the universty , and the bus came at 12 o'clock....

i took two lectures to day , one it was writing and the other one was spoken .

they were our last lectures because in the next week we will have our final exams .

finally, i came back home at five o'clock . and as u see i write for you now:D







wish to see the correction ....


regards.....

[xiakgoi]

hello everybody ..... i am very happy because there is someone who corrects our mistakes here .. so, firstly i want to thank you very much for your effort ... and i want to share with you this nice topic......


What did I do today?

i woke up at nine o'clock , i revised some lessons in Arabic and then i had breakfast ....

after that i prepared to go to the university , and the bus came at 12 o'clock....

i had two lectures today , one was writing and the other one was spoken .

they were our last lectures because in the next week we will have our final exams .

finally, i came back home at five o'clock . and as u see i write for you now







wish to see the correction .... regards.....



:)

[Cute Girl]

hello xiakgoi

thank you very much for your effort

and please i want you to correct this for me because i wrote it in my copy book and i don't know if it is correct or no ......

the topic was about


( Need of learning English)


There are many things students need it when they learn english . first of all is


they need good teachers to teach them , because if the teacher was good



with his students the students will understand very quickly and they will love


the subject . The second thing is they need comfotable big halls . the third


thing is they need useful English books because if they read more books they



will develope their language . In shore universities have to give students


what they need.



regards .....

THE CUTE GIRL :)

[xiakgoi]

There are many things students need when they learn English . First of all,


they need good teachers to teach them , because if the teacher is good



with *their students the students will understand very quickly and they will love


the subject . The second thing is they need comfortable big halls . the third


thing is they need useful English books because if they read more books they



will develop their language skills. In **short , universities have to give students


what they need.





*- Technically, 'his' is right, but I think 'their' works better because the 'good teacher' you are talking about could be either a man or woman. But either works.

**- I assume this is what you meant to say? I'm sorry if it's not.



:)

[Cute Girl]

Thank you very much for your helping :).

[xiakgoi]

I had a very romantic lunch today with my wife on behalf of her birthday and we both enjoyed it a lot.


:)

[jovineeth]

My name is Jay, I am quite keen to improve my English communication, especially writing skills. I desperately needed to improve my skills on English as I am currently applying for Administration jobs. I know it takes sometime to get everything perfect, but I wanted to achieve as much as possible.

Anyone can correct for me..........Thanks in advance!!!:)

[xiakgoi]

My name is Jay and I am quite keen to improve my English communication, especially writing skills. I desperately need to improve my skills in English as I am currently applying for Administration jobs. I know it takes some time to get everything perfect, but I would like to achieve as much as possible.

If anyone can this correct for me..........Thanks in advance!!!




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I would say to watch and make sure you are in the correct tense throughout, because the main problem here was that you were switching between past and present tense, when the past didn't make any sense here. Other than that, you are able to write English very well. :)

[jovineeth]

Hi

Thanks for your valuable advice!!! Never recognised these tense problem before!!! I am appreciating you for letting me know....I hope it would be helpful for other members too..


My name is Jay and I am quite keen to improve my English communication, especially writing skills. I desperately need to improve my skills in English as I am currently applying for Administration jobs. I know it takes some time to get everything perfect, but I would like to achieve as much as possible.

If anyone can this correct for me..........Thanks in advance!!!




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I would say to watch and make sure you are in the correct tense throughout, because the main problem here was that you were switching between past and present tense, when the past didn't make any sense here. Other than that, you are able to write English very well. :)

[Lonely Ag@ain]

Dear Friends,

I love to see this page that all are exchanging their words and getting corrected... this is a very nice one and i apppreciate all those who are helping!!!

Good going..!

[Wardaa]

Dear all,

Yeah, I also, believe that this is a good excerise for all of us to see our common mistakes. I totally encourage you (lonely ag@ain)to add your notes and and see. It works and you get help from others.

And very special thanks for xiakgoi for his effords, time and participation. I definetely appreciate what he done so far.

Keep posting your notes, and we will love to read it.

Regards,
Wardaa

[xiakgoi]

Dear Friends,

I love to see this page where all are exchanging their words and getting corrected... this is a very nice one and i appreciate all those who are helping!!!

Good going..!

:)

[xiakgoi]

Dear all,

Yeah, I also believe that this is a good exercise for all of us to see our common mistakes. I totally encourage you (lonely ag@ain)to add your notes and see. It works and you get help from others.

And very special thanks for xiakgoi for her efforts, time and participation. I definitely appreciate what she has done so far.

Keep posting your notes, and we will love to read them.

Regards,
Wardaa


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It's quite alright that you made the mistake, but I am a girl. Just to let you all know. :)

And I appreciate the thanks from everybody- I enjoy correcting these and helping everybody. :]

[Cute Girl]

Hello xiakgoi

I would like to say thank you very much for your helping again and again ... :)

and please could you correct this paragraph for me ...


It is a descriptive paragraph and it is about my teacher ...




My teacher is very beautiful. She has

a long blond hair , big eyes , straight nose

and a wide small mouth . Her skin is white

and her neck is quite long , so she always

wears short necklaces . She is quite short

and slim .She wears a blouse , short skirt

and sandals.










Thats all but i dont know how can i conclude it .


So please give me any sentence can i put it in the end of the paragraph to conclude it .

Thanks alot


regards .........

[xiakgoi]

My teacher is very beautiful. She has long blond hair , big eyes , a straight nose and a wide, small mouth . Her skin is white and her neck is quite long , so she always wears short necklaces . She is quite short and slim .She wears a blouse , short skirt and sandals.



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I'm sorry but I'm not quite sure how to finish this.. I'm sure anything would work. Or leave it as is, it sounds finished to me.

[Cute Girl]

Thanks alot ..........:)

[halyey]

Hello Mr xiakgoi

I wana to correct this pragraph if you can.

My name is Halyey and I wake up in the early morning. I shower then I pray. in the 6:00 Am I go to a college to study I.C.T about one hour. Next I go to my work then I start. approximately 11:00 Am I finish my work and Finaly, go to my house.

Thanks

by Halyey.

[xiakgoi]

My name is Halyey and I wake up in the early morning. I shower then I pray. At 6:00 a.m. I go to a college to study I.C.T for about one hour. Next I go to my work and I start. At approximately 11:00 a.m. I finish my work and finally go to my house.

Thanks

by Halyey.

[NOVA]

Heya


Wow xiakgoi (http://www.englishpage.com/forums/member.php?u=9439) thank you so much for correcting our mistakes .

Well I woke up late today ,didn't have time to do anything .
hahaha sorry but I'm really bad at describing.

:) keep up the good work .

[xiakgoi]

Heya


Wow xiakgoi (http://www.englishpage.com/forums/member.php?u=9439) thank you so much for correcting our mistakes .

Well I woke up late today ,didn't have time to do anything .
hahaha sorry but I'm really bad at describing.

keep up the good work .

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There is nothing to correct in this post. :)

[xiakgoi]

Just to let you all know I'm still willing to correct posts if you'd like, there hasn't been one in a while though. :)

[khadija]

Hi friends,

I am very happy to be with you again.
I was really busy but now I have time to writing.
I am very excited to improve my writing.
with Xiakgoi we will certainly improve our writing.
we are grateful to you (Xiakgoi)
Your helping is very useful for us.

Today, I have a short writing.

( Today is very hot but very wonderful. It is the first day of summer holiday.
I wonder if some one has a summer holiday,too.
This holiday will be very privileged. It will be special for English.
For 10 years, I and english were playing. I was lazy and it was severe so our games have always been a failure. we were always losing the games.
Then we met teacher Sara. She told us a lot of things then we agreed.
After two monthes I will be excited and it will be funny so I am sure. We will play a wonderful game then we will win the game)

I look forward to the correction.


Bye,
khadija:)

[xiakgoi]

Hi friends,

I am very happy to be with you again.
I was really busy but now I have time to write.
I am very excited to improve my writing.
with Xiakgoi we will certainly improve our writing.
we are grateful to you (Xiakgoi)
Your helping is very useful to us.

Today, I have a short writing.

( Today is very hot but very wonderful. It is the first day of the summer holiday.
I wonder if someone has a summer holiday,too.
This holiday will be very privileged. It will be special for English.
For 10 years, English and I were playing. I was lazy and it was severe so our games have always been a failure. We were always losing the games.
Then we met our teacher Sara. She told us a lot of things and then we agreed. After two months I will be excited and it will be funny, I am sure. We will play a wonderful game then we will win the game)

I look forward to the correction.


Bye,
khadija

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Welcome back! I'm glad to see you writing here again. However, I did have some trouble understanding what you meant about the game between you and English. I'm sorry to say that it didn't make much sense. Maybe you could help explain it a little better? Thanks. :)

[jovineeth]

Hi
I am back!!!it is been busy with exam..ohhhh..finally, released from lots of hardwork....hope everybody still enjoying with writing!!..Well, I am quite interested in writing and understanding others' mistakes...even if I am busy I do find time for reading others scrap for understanding the common mistakes...

Again thanks for all of the friends who are volunteered for correcting errors!!I really appreciate for that!!...

Hope all are enjoying summer holidays.

Thanks in advance for correcting my scrap....

[xiakgoi]

Hi
I am back!!! I have been busy with exams..ohhhh..finally, released from lots of hard work....hope everybody still enjoys to write!!..Well, I am quite interested in writing and understanding others mistakes...even if I am busy I do find time to read others writings to understand the common mistakes...

Again thanks for all of the friends who have volunteered to correct errors!! I really appreciate it!!...

Hope all are enjoying the summer holidays.

Thanks in advance for correcting my writing....


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Welcome back! :)

[jovineeth]

Hi,
Thanks for correcting errors!!!

Well, I thought to write again....come on everybody..wake up and participate in this forum!!!

It is very nice, sunny day today. So I am planning to go out for a shopping..I love shopping, spending lots of money for shopping....Anyway, today I have no work, so I am trying to enjoy....

Again, thanks for correcting my writings..And I am looking forward for someone to correct this writing too!!

[xiakgoi]

Hi,
Thanks for correcting errors!!!

Well, I thought to write again....come on everybody..wake up and participate in this forum!!!

It is a very nice, sunny day today. So I am planning to go out shopping..I love shopping, spending lots of money shopping....Anyway, today I have no work, so I am trying to enjoy it....

Again, thanks for correcting my writings..And I am looking forward to someone correcting this writing too!!

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:)

[shimaa]

hi
wow!
i am so happy to find these posts.

what did I do today?

i woke up at 9 a.m.
after eating breakfast and some other things, i studied english words.
now is summer holidays. but i study next year lessons for myself!
after it, i watched TV(a cartoon!)
but i didnt see it completely because one of my friends telephoned me and i went to talk to her.
then i checked my emails,my weblog and ...
.
(now i am thinking what i did after it!:D)
.
i prayed and i ate lunch.
i spoke to my brother ...
and again i came online
and now i am writing this! (5:40 p.m)

take care of yourself
if i have wrong, plz correct it.....thanks so much...
bye

[xiakgoi]

hi
wow!
i am so happy to find these posts.

what did I do today?

i woke up at 9 a.m.
after eating breakfast and some other things, i studied English words.
now is the summer holidays, but i study next year lessons by myself!
after that, i watched TV(a cartoon!)
but i didn't see all of it because one of my friends telephoned me and i went to talk to her.
then i checked my emails,my weblog and ...
.
(now i am thinking what i did after that!)
.
i prayed and i ate lunch.
i spoke to my brother ...
and again i came online
and now i am writing this! (5:40 p.m)

take care of yourself
if i have mistakes, please correct them.....thanks so much...
bye


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:)

[shimaa]

hi

thanks so much xiakgoi for correcting my mistakes

i learnt some new things

:)

[Lion]

Peace be upon you
This is our way in the greeting.I invite you to use it
You have to correct my mistakes upon seeing it.
I hpoe from all of you invocation to my family .
What are they suffering.

All appreciation for you:)

[xiakgoi]

Peace be upon you
This is our way of greeting.I invite you to use it
You have to correct my mistakes upon seeing it.
I hope for help from you for my family .
From what are they suffering.

I appreciate everything.

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:)

[Lion]

I appreciate your efforts:)

[kid304]

Today, I woke up at 6:30 am. I went into the loo and spent 30 minutes in it.
Next, I went to school, the distance between home and my school is approximately 1 km, I had a English subject this morning, it's quite interesting. After then, I returned home but I didn't have the key to unlock the door, so I waited my friend who live with me in the same house. I had a good lunch, food is very delicious. This afternoon was not especial.

This paragraph is really basic.
I am very glad if anyone correct it for me. Thanks in avance !

[xiakgoi]

Today, I woke up at 6:30 am. I went into the loo and spent 30 minutes in it.
Next, I went to school, the distance between my home and my school is approximately 1 km, I had an English class this morning, it's quite interesting. After that, I returned home but I didn't have the key to unlock the door, so I waited for my friend who lives with me in the same house. I had a good lunch, the food was very delicious. This afternoon was not special.

This paragraph is really basic.
I am very glad if anyone can correct it for me. Thanks in advance !

[Lion]

I woke up at 10;45 . I haven't eaten my breakfast at home.After that i went to a resturant to eat a breakfast instead of which i lost it .I returned home
but the key wasn't with me . My father when he back home from his work
he has seen me.
Don't forget your correcting for my mistakes:)

[xiakgoi]

I woke up at 10;45 . I didn't eat my breakfast at home.After that i went to a restaurant to eat breakfast instead of which i lost it *.I returned home
but the key wasn't with me . My father when he came back home from his work he saw me.
Don't forget you're correcting for my mistakes.

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:)
*- I wasn't exactly sure what you were trying to say here, sorry.

[danyal]

[v.nice khadija.but i think u r so lucky that u r still student.this is very good period of life.after that all thing is changed.so boring life.by d way i m danyal here in uae.and u from?do u like to share more about u.


How are doing today? I hope you are fine.
What did I do today?
I woke up early because I have 2 mid-term exam are writing and reading.
I reviewed my lessons until 9:00 a.m then I went to the university.
I took grammar lecture for 2 hours after that came reading test time but
fortunately,the teacher apologized for the test. we were very happy.
For this, I had enough time to review the writing.
Surely, I tested in the writing. It was not bad.
Finally, I went back to the house at 4:30 p.m
and now as you are seeing I write to you.
I hope to hear from all of you ,too


Have a nice day
your friend
khadija:)[/quote]