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abcdeflearn1
07-28-2009, 10:49 AM
Some only pay ten bucks for something that they expect it to be worth double.
Should I keep "it" in the sentence?
Thanks
Marius Hancu
07-28-2009, 03:27 PM
No, you already have something as a placeholder.
Some only pay ten bucks for something that they expect it to be worth double.
Should I keep "it" in the sentence?
Thanks
I certainly agree with Marius that the word "it" that you have in this sentence doesn't belong there, but my reason is somewhat different. In the subordinate clause with the subject and verb "they expect", the object (and subject of the infinitive "to be") it already there, that is, the relative pronoun "that". Thus there is no use for the word "it", which sits in a place where you might expect such an object.
Interestingly, the word "that" can be omitted in this sentence (although it is certainly fine to have it), but even if you do omit "that", it is "understood" to be there, so you still cannot have "it" as the object in the subordinate clause.
abcdeflearn1
07-28-2009, 07:04 PM
All crystal clear. Thanks a lot.
Marius Hancu
07-29-2009, 12:31 AM
Shorter:
Some only pay ten bucks for something worth double.
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