Eddie88
09-02-2009, 02:44 PM
Keeping your brain ticking helps you to sleep at the end of the day, probably similar to how he paints by numbers to tire his brain.
Keeping your brain ticking helps you to sleep at the end of the day, which is probably similar to how he paints by numbers to tire his brain.
It makes sense to me either way, but I'm sure others may find one they feel is clearer and reads better than the other:
Do you prefer the inclusion of which is, making it a relative clause, or
do you prefer it as phrase without it?
Keeping your brain ticking helps you to sleep at the end of the day, which is probably similar to how he paints by numbers to tire his brain.
It makes sense to me either way, but I'm sure others may find one they feel is clearer and reads better than the other:
Do you prefer the inclusion of which is, making it a relative clause, or
do you prefer it as phrase without it?