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[Anonymous]

please correct

1.I had recieved an email from Joy day before yesterday.
2.You sent reply only after you finish listening your favorite song, this is not fair.
3.The terrorists group has landed here according to the latest news, since I am studying in an American university my parents are little bit scared.Also our institute is near American naval base.Infact American embassy has told many Americans to leave the place.Anyway don't worry.

thanks a million

[Anonymous]

1.I had recieved an email from Joy day before yesterday.
2.You sent reply only after you finish listening your favorite song, this is not fair.
3.The terrorists group has landed here according to the latest news, since I am studying in an American university my parents are little bit scared.Also our institute is near American naval base.Infact American embassy has told many Americans to leave the place.Anyway don't worry.

1. I received (note the spelling. 'i' before 'e', except after 'c') an email from Joy the day before yesterday.

2. You only sent me a reply after you finished listening to your favourite song, that's not fair! (I have corrected yours to make it sound more natural)

3. A terrorist group has landed here according to the latest news. Since I am studying at/in an American university my parents are a little bit scared/worried. Also, our institute is near an American naval base. The American Embassy has told many Americans to leave. But don't worry/I'm not worried. (again I tried to make your sentences sound more natural in English.)

Hope this helps!