Camilus
07-05-2004, 10:37 PM
Dear teachers!
Could you please check the following sentences and correct them for me?
1. Tears well up in my eyes when reminiscing about old video games like Doom and Quake created in the midst of the 90s.
2. The holiday season begun, [vocationers, holidaymakers, holidyers] reserve tickets and prepare for departures while travel agencies lick their lips at the thought of earned money.
3. She doesn't give a cuss about what this old [fart/buffer] is [gobbing/rehashing] about.
4-1. Without mincing my words, I say our situation isn't [to be] envied.
4-2. Without talking turkey, I say our situation isn't [to be] envied.
5. I came into the musical shop to look around and buy myself one guitar, but it was a daylight robbery when I saw the price increase.
6. You shouldn’t go to any country without a travel guide if you don’t want to find yourself on a wild-goose chase.
7-1. It’s impossible to work with Darren; his blow-hot-and-cold attidude paralyzes the project completely.
7-2. It’s impossible to work with Darren; he blows hot and cold about his attidude to our project which is completely paralyzed by it.
8. I bought that two-years-used guitar via eBay. I think I have struck a great deal because this stuff really looks spick and span. (Can "spick and span" be used in that way, or should it only be associated with house?)
Thank you very much in advance
Best regards
Could you please check the following sentences and correct them for me?
1. Tears well up in my eyes when reminiscing about old video games like Doom and Quake created in the midst of the 90s.
2. The holiday season begun, [vocationers, holidaymakers, holidyers] reserve tickets and prepare for departures while travel agencies lick their lips at the thought of earned money.
3. She doesn't give a cuss about what this old [fart/buffer] is [gobbing/rehashing] about.
4-1. Without mincing my words, I say our situation isn't [to be] envied.
4-2. Without talking turkey, I say our situation isn't [to be] envied.
5. I came into the musical shop to look around and buy myself one guitar, but it was a daylight robbery when I saw the price increase.
6. You shouldn’t go to any country without a travel guide if you don’t want to find yourself on a wild-goose chase.
7-1. It’s impossible to work with Darren; his blow-hot-and-cold attidude paralyzes the project completely.
7-2. It’s impossible to work with Darren; he blows hot and cold about his attidude to our project which is completely paralyzed by it.
8. I bought that two-years-used guitar via eBay. I think I have struck a great deal because this stuff really looks spick and span. (Can "spick and span" be used in that way, or should it only be associated with house?)
Thank you very much in advance
Best regards