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[Anonymous]

Dear teacher,
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My Lord, I am talking to you about my poorness in this evening. With all what happened today (although there were nothing serious) when I was intentional to sin working in Sunday I have understood You have been wanting me go away this place where I am living with many comforts but they aren’t mine. Yes, My Lord! The God said: “A bird has her nest, a fox has his cave but the One ( I ) have no place to lean on one’s head”.
Yes, You are right. “It’s better to live under one’s cottage root than to stay with other’s house” (Hc29,22). I am looking for another place and that takes a little time denfinitely. I am ready to do things what You want but please help me!

My Lord, it is one day left being the fourth anniversary of my father’s death. I beg You take his soul to the rest place. I feel sort of regretting about my errors what I did in the past when my father was alive. Father, forgive me!

Thanks a lot

[Anonymous]

Please correct and suggest the better ones

Dear Lord, I am talking to you about my low spirits this evening. With all that (has) happened today (although there was nothing serious). I consciously sinned by working on Sunday. I understand You have been wanting me get away from this place where I am living with many material comforts but they aren’t mine. Yes, My Lord! God said: “A bird has her nest, a fox has his cave but I have no place to lean on one’s head”.
Yes, You are right. “It’s better to live under one’s cottage roof than to stay in another’s house” (Hc29,22). I am looking for another place but it is taking time. I am ready to do things You wish but please help me!

My Lord, it is the day before the fourth anniversary of my father’s death. I beg You take his soul to Heaven (I beg You grant him everlasting life). I feel sort of regretful about the errors of my past when my father was still alive. Father, forgive me!

(Hope this helps!)