Sentences

[Anonymous]

Hi everybody,

Would you correct my sentences?

1)Lory is my best friend. She has a two months old baby girl.
2)She decided to take English courses to become eligible for {the} Pharmacy Technician Course’s requirements.
3)She doesn’t have need to spend her time on commute from her home to college.
4)Her financial condition is not that much sound, so she can’t afford a babysitter.
5)She can study at home whenever she will get time; she can also take care of her baby and continue her education.
6)English is her second language, so she needs to study hard and concentrate more on her study. It is uncertain; how much time she can spend on her study.
7)She will get disturbed whenever her baby will wake-up, cry, hungry, and will be sick. She will unable to complete her assignment at a time.
8)She will find more excuses to avoid study such as she will tell she get tired by taking care of my baby and family. She will lose [her ]enthusiasm.
9)She can take English classes by distance.
10) She can study at home for mathematic.
11) She can attend college for {the} Pharmacy Technician course on weekends when her husband will be at home, and he can take care of her baby.


Thank you.

[Pete]

1)Lory is my best friend. She has a two months old baby girl. [Ok.]
2)She decided to take English courses to become eligible for {the} Pharmacy Technician Course's requirements. [If "Pharmacy Technician Course" is the official name of a course listed that way in the college's literature, it can be capitalized. With lower case letters, it would be a descriptive phrase, also proper. In either case, I would use "the".]
3)She doesn't <strike>have</strike> need to spend her time <strike>on commute</strike> commuting from her home to college.
4)Her financial condition is not that <strike>much</strike> sound [or: not very sound], so she can't afford a babysitter.
5)She can study at home whenever she <strike>will get</strike> gets/has time; she can also take care of her baby and continue her education.
6)English is her second language, so she needs to study hard and concentrate more on her study. It is uncertain how much time she can spend on her study. [No semicolon in the second sentence.]
7)She will get disturbed whenever her baby <strike>will wake-up, cry, hungry, and will be sick</strike> wakes up, cries, is hungry, or is sick. She will unable to complete her assignment at such a time.
8)She will find more excuses to avoid study, such as she will <strike>tell</strike> say she <strike>get tired by</strike> is tired because of taking care of my baby and family. She will lose [her ]enthusiasm. [It sounds better with "her enthusiasm". Did you mean "her baby and family" instead of "my baby and family"?]
9)She can take English classes by distance. [Ok.]
10) She can study mathematics at home. <strike>for mathematic.</strike>
11) She can attend college for {the} Pharmacy Technician course on weekends when her husband will be at home, and he can take care of her baby.