please check this

[Anonymous]

Please check this

1We went to Belgium to celebrate my niece's 5th birthday..We were planning to go to Germany and Netherlands too but due to the time limit we couldn't make it but anyway we didn't miss the disney land and Eiffel tower in paris.Paris is just one and half hours from belgium if we go by train.I really wished susan and Joy were with me but as susan doesn't have passport we couldn't make it possible.I came back this morning at around 1.00 am.

2.So you are all set for your wedding.

3. A baby boy was born to my brother on last Thursday they have named him 'samuel'.


thanks a lot

[Anonymous]

1.

First sentence:
correct.

Second sentence:
Did you have an actual time limit? Sounds a bit weird. If you meant "lack of time", I'd rewrite the sentence.
"but due to our lack/want of time"
Disney Land, Eiffel Tower and Paris have to be capitalised.

Third sentence:
- "one and a half hours"
- capitalise "Belgium"
- there's a grammatical problem in your sentence. The conditional is wrongly used. Your sentence should be like this:
"Paris will only be one and a half hours from Belgium if we go by train.
But since I assume you actually went by train and not just thought about it. You can also write:
"Having gone by train, we reached Paris in one and a half hours."

Fourth sentence:
- capitalise "Susan"
- rewrite the sentence: "I really wished Susan and Joy had been with me but since Susan dosen't have a passport, it was simply not possible.

Last sentence:
fine.

2. Should this be a question or a conclusion?
If it were a question, you'd have to write: "So are you all ...?"

3. It's better to write: "My brother's girl-friend/wife gave birth to a baby boy last Thursday. They name him "Samuel".