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Anonymous
08-15-2004, 02:10 AM
Please correct

"If i didn't lost my memory power, I think today is your wedding anniversary( any other way to say this). We all wish you both a very happy second Wedding anniversary.Always be happy and ( teacher can u suggest some good sentences which i can write here.)"

thanks in advance

Rusty
08-15-2004, 09:27 AM
"If i haven't lost my memory <strike>power</strike>, I think today is your wedding anniversary( any other way to say this). (This is very casual and appropriate for close firends. For more formality, I suggest, "On the occasion of your second wedding anniversary, we wish you....)

We all wish you both a very happy second wedding anniversary. Always be happy and ( teacher can u suggest some good sentences which i can write here.)"(Suggestion: ...we wish you both a very enjoyable day and continued happiness for many years).