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[Anonymous]

Being an E-PJJ student is the most honorable, pride and exciting moment. It is because UITM is among the best higher learning institutions in Malaysia which has produced millions of professionals. I also feel excited because it has been my dream since my childhood to study in UITM and the dream comes true when I get the opportunity to study in E-PJJ majoring in Marketing. This opportunity once in a lifetime, therefore it motivates myself to learn and gain more knowledge especially in marketing field. At the beginning, I felt very difficult to commit and it burdened my self. However I manage to overcome the constraint. By learning in E-PJJ, it provides me with challenges as a student, employee and wife. I have to manage my time effectively and really committed on what has been scheduled. Finally I will work hard and achieve my goals in my studying.

[Rusty]

Being an E-PJJ student is the most honorable, proud and exciting moment. It is because UITM is among the best higher learning institutions in Malaysia and has produced millions of professionals.
(Or, among the best.....which have produced....)
I also feel excited because it has been my dream since my childhood to study in UITM and the dream came true when I got the opportunity to study in E-PJJ majoring in Marketing. This opportunity is once in a lifetime, therefore it motivates me <strike>myself</strike> to learn and gain more knowledge, especially in the marketing field. At the beginning, I felt it very difficult to commit and it burdened me <strike>my self</strike>. However, I managed to overcome the constraint. <strike>By l</strike> Learning in E-PJJ <strike>, it</strike> provides me with challenges as a student, employee and wife. I have to manage my time effectively and really be committed to/on what has been scheduled. Finally, I will work hard and achieve my goals in my studying.