TWE essay

[Anonymous]

I am preparing for the Test of Wrinting English and I want to know what's the best RE-formulation of some sentences that I 've written

Can you rewrite this for me please:


Job is the reason of living of people, once the human appeared on the world, they worked to survive.

I'm sure it will have a better reformulation, can you help also for this:

Secondly, tennage are always irritated by the idea to always ask their parents for some money, their parents too!

So, sorry...

I've selected all the worse-written sentences from my essay

Thank you for your help!

[Anonymous]

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huh damn you suck !!

[Anonymous]

Hi,

I’m not an expert and will try only to show my own opinion - no responsibility is taken for the correctness of this information.

To have a reason to do something – a reason for something.
In your case it should be reason for living

The verb tenses! It seems to be a little bit clumsy.
I guess, you are the German native speaker. You translated a lot of the idioms literally. Use i.e. dict.leo.org to find the right translations.

BR,
Michail.