Anonymous
09-17-2004, 08:30 PM
Hi teacher, kindly correct my grammar.
Title: Last week, you had an unforgettable experience. Write a card to a friend telling him or her about the incident in 80-100 words.
Hi Sally! How are you? Last week, my friend invited me to join him on a fishing trip on a boat. We left Port Klang on a hired fishing boat at about 9p.m. As he was enjoying himself, I was feeling really sick. I had never been on boat before, so I never knew that I would be seasick. Soon I had to get up quickly to vomit the contents of my stomach into the sea. I spend the whole night streched out miserably on the floor of the cabin. I promised my self that I would never ride in a boat again. Hope to hear from you soon. Bye.
Title: Last week, you had an unforgettable experience. Write a card to a friend telling him or her about the incident in 80-100 words.
Hi Sally! How are you? Last week, my friend invited me to join him on a fishing trip on a boat. We left Port Klang on a hired fishing boat at about 9p.m. As he was enjoying himself, I was feeling really sick. I had never been on boat before, so I never knew that I would be seasick. Soon I had to get up quickly to vomit the contents of my stomach into the sea. I spend the whole night streched out miserably on the floor of the cabin. I promised my self that I would never ride in a boat again. Hope to hear from you soon. Bye.