Is this sentences correct?

[bbmak]

Hi:
Can you check see are the sentences have grammartical errors?

Sentence.1
The sources that the Americans used were all documented in English, which all Americans point of view.

Sentence.2
China still could not heal the scar from the opium war.

[Anonymous]

The sources that the Americans used were all documented in English, which all Americans point of view.


You might want to consider some changes in the first sentence.

The information from the sources that the Americans used was all documented in English; it had the American point of view.


The second sentence looks fine, still I would make "scar" plural.


Plin.

[bbmak]

but does the grammar correct in the sentence 1?

The sources that the Americans used were all documented in English, which all Americans point of view.


You might want to consider some changes in the first sentence.

The information from the sources that the Americans used was all documented in English; it had the American point of view.


The second sentence looks fine, still I would make "scar" plural.


Plin.