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[Anonymous]

Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.

I am writing to inform about the amount of goods that you requested to export on 30 Sept. They are in the following list: (including the amount that we didn’t finish at the last exporting time):
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1)
We regret to inform that we won’t be able to export them on 30 Sept, because we haven’t had enough time to send them to the place making them hard and to plate them. Please let us know if you accept the kinds of the above goods will be export at the same time with RP15 and AP8, that is on 08 Oct?

2)
For the goods of P6, we have only about 22.089 pcs of the first sort. If you need the amount of 23.88 pcs, we compel to have to export 1.711 pcs of the second sort. Please let us know if we will have to export only 22.089 pcs of the first sort or 22.089 pcs of the first sort + 1.711 pcs of the second sort?
We are looking for your reply.

Thanks a lot

[Pete]

>Please correct and suggest the better ones.

I am writing to inform about the amount of goods that you requested us to export on 30 Sept. They are in the following list: (including the amount that we <strike>didn't finish at the last exporting time</strike> had not finished at the time we last exported goods to you):
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1)
We regret to inform that we won't be able to export them on 30 Sept, because we haven't had enough time to send them to the place <strike>making them hard</strike> for hardening and to plate them. Please let us know if you <strike>accept the kinds of the above goods will be export</strike> will accept those goods at the same time <strike>with</strike> that we export RP15 and AP8, that is on 08 Oct?

2)
For the goods of P6, we have only <u>about</u> 22.089 pcs of the first sort. If you need the amount of 23.88 [What does this number mean?] pcs, we <strike>compel to</strike> will have to export 1.711 pcs of the second sort. Please let us know if we will have to export only 22.089 pcs of the first sort or 22.089 pcs of the first sort + 1.711 pcs of the second sort? [I still do not understand the math. It appears that for this to make sense, the requested total must be 23.800. Also, American usage puts commas where you have periods in these numbers. A final question: do you really have 22.089 pieces? If so, don't say "about" in the first sentence. If you really do not know how many pieces you can export, I don't see how your customer can reply.]
We are looking for your reply.