Anonymous
09-20-2004, 05:38 PM
Hi teacher, please correct my sentenses
Q: Write a card to your friend to tell her about unforgotten experience.
Hi Sally! How are you? Last week my friend invited me to join him on a fishing trip on a boat. We left Port Klang on a hired fishing boat at about 9p.m. As he was enjoying himself, I was feeling really sick. I had never been on boat before, so I never knew that I would be seasick. Soon I had to get up quickly to vomit the contents of my stomach into the sea. I spend the whole night strectched out miserably on the floor of the cabin. I promised my self that I would never ride in a boat again. Hope to hear from you soon. Good bye.
Q: Write a card to your friend to tell her about unforgotten experience.
Hi Sally! How are you? Last week my friend invited me to join him on a fishing trip on a boat. We left Port Klang on a hired fishing boat at about 9p.m. As he was enjoying himself, I was feeling really sick. I had never been on boat before, so I never knew that I would be seasick. Soon I had to get up quickly to vomit the contents of my stomach into the sea. I spend the whole night strectched out miserably on the floor of the cabin. I promised my self that I would never ride in a boat again. Hope to hear from you soon. Good bye.