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[Anonymous]

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1.This morning I talked to uncle and aunt and .......( suggest better one,Today is my husband's uncle's 80th birthday I want to tell my husband that I called and wished his uncle onhis 80th birthday)

2.Next time when we go to Trichur ( their place), we shall go together to their house.Did you remember me when you went there last time?

3.I swear unless you brought your past between us, I will not talk anything about it once we start living together.I too expect the same from you . There were many times you asked me about my past.If you want to know in detail, I am ready to write to you , but ask me now.Don't ask me anything once we start a new life.

Thanks in advance

[Rusty]

1.This morning I talked to uncle and aunt and .......( suggest better one,Today is my husband's uncle's 80th birthday I want to tell my husband that I called and wished his uncle onhis 80th birthday) (Your sentence is fine. You might continue with...."I wished Uncle (his name) a happy 80th birthday." If you do not call your husband's uncle "Uncle (his name)," then say "your Uncle (his name)").

2.Next time when we go to Trichur ( their place), we shall go together to their house.Did you remember me when you went there last time? (OK).

3.I swear unless you <strike>brought</strike> bring your past between us, I will not talk anything about it once we start living together.I too expect the same from you . There were many times you asked me about my past.If you want to know in detail, I am ready to write to you , but ask me now.Don't ask me anything once we start a new life.