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Anonymous
10-10-2004, 08:49 AM
Please correct

1.When I am with you , I will wake up early.Now I have nothing to do by getting up early.Although I sleep late night as I like to study during night.( suggest better one)

2.I really don't like to hurt you.ALso I don't get elated by making you sad.Infact later it hurts me a lot when I feel that I have hurt you

Thanks

Anonymous
10-10-2004, 10:09 AM
Please correct

1.When I am with you , I will wake up early.Now I have nothing to do by getting up early.Although I sleep late night as I like to study during night.( suggest better one)

2.I really don't like to hurt you.ALso I don't get elated by making you sad.Infact later it hurts me a lot when I feel that I have hurt you

Thanks

1.when..................getting up early. Also I used to study /do homework assignments during night so I sleep very late at night.(suggest good one)

2.I really don't like to hurt you.Also I don't get elated by making you sad.Infact later it hurts me a lot when I feel ( here feel or realize or suggest suitable word ) that I have hurt you

3.I will never deny your calls .

thanks

Anonymous
10-10-2004, 10:11 AM
Please correct

1.When I am with you , I will wake up early.Now I have nothing to do by getting up early.Although I sleep late night as I like to study during night.( suggest better one)

2.I really don't like to hurt you.ALso I don't get elated by making you sad.Infact later it hurts me a lot when I feel that I have hurt you

Thanks

1.when..................getting up early. Also I used to study /do homework assignments during night so I sleep very late at night.(suggest good one)

2.I really don't like to hurt you.Also I don't get elated by making you sad.Infact later it hurts me a lot when I feel ( here feel or realize or suggest suitable word ) that I have hurt you

3.I will never deny your calls .

thanks


sorry I forgot to write my username.I post the same questions again with few additions

thanks

Rusty
10-11-2004, 06:12 PM
1.When I am with you , I will wake up early.Now I have nothing to do by getting up early.Although I sleep late night as I like to study during night.( suggest better one) (I go to sleep late as I like to study at night).

2.I really don't like to hurt you.Also, I don't get elated by making you sad. In fact, later it hurts me a lot when I feel that I have hurt you. (OK).

1.when..................getting up early. Also I used to study /do homework assignments during night so I sleep very late at night.(suggest good one)
(I used to study and do homework assignments late into the night, so I used to go to bed very late (even though I had to get up early)).

2.I really don't like to hurt you. Also, I don't get elated by making you sad. In fact, later it hurts me a lot when I feel ( here feel or realize or suggest suitable word ) that I have hurt you. ("Realize" is a good word to use here).

3.I will never deny your calls. (Better: I will never refuse your calls).