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Anonymous
10-12-2004, 07:47 AM
Please correct and suggest better ones

1.Hope you are feeling good now.The story of your leaves is very interesting.But I was just kidding .I will never complain about the same.Even if you don't take leave for me , I will catch the next flight as soon as I finish my exams and will always be with you.

2.Atleast your father says that I am a matured and understanding girl,but you always say the opposite.Perhaps I behave more childish with you, that's why , right?

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Rusty
10-12-2004, 04:28 PM
1.Hope you are feeling good now. (This is OK, but if a person has been sick it is more natural to say, "feeling well").
The story of your leaves is very interesting. (Leaves may be a common expression in British English. In America, more common terms are: time off, days off, leave of absence (for several days or weeks), vacation. "Leave" is used in military terminology).
But I was just kidding .I will never complain about the same.Even if you don't take leave for me , (...if you don't take a leave to visit me...)
I will catch the next flight as soon as I finish my exams and will always be with you.

2.At least your father says that I am a matured ("mature" is more common) and understanding girl, but you always say the opposite.Perhaps I behave more childishly with you, that's why , right?