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[bmo]

we completely agree in this adage, "Making your customer your friend."

Half of the mudslides are caused by rampage loggings and deliberate abuse.

Half of the mudslides can be attributed to rampage loggings and deliberate abuse.


thanks.

[Rusty]

We completely agree with <strike>in</strike> this adage, "Making your customer your friend."

Half of the mudslides are caused by rampage loggings and deliberate abuse.

Half of the mudslides can be attributed to rampage loggings and deliberate abuse.
(I'm not sure if "rampage loggings" is appropriate. Can you please explain what you mean? Otherwise, the grammar is OK in both sentences).

[Rusty]

We completely agree with <strike>in</strike> this adage, "Making your customer your friend."

Half of the mudslides are caused by rampage logging <strike>s</strike> and deliberate abuse.

Half of the mudslides can be attributed to rampage logging <strike>s</strike> and deliberate abuse.

[bmo]

uncontrolled logging. do you have a better one? how about logging rampage?

thanks.

[Rusty]

uncontrolled logging. do you have a better one? how about logging rampage?
("Uncontrolled logging" is good. I'm not saying that rampage logging/logging rampage is incorrect, it's just that the meaning is not obvious. A Google search brings up "logging rampage" but only one "rampage logging" -- yours).

[bmo]

ok. thanks a lot.

[Pete]

uncontrolled logging. do you have a better one? how about logging rampage?
("Uncontrolled logging" is good. I'm not saying that rampage logging/logging rampage is incorrect, it's just that the meaning is not obvious. A Google search brings up "logging rampage" but only one "rampage logging" -- yours).
I imagine the word that bmo is searching for is: rampant logging.

[bmo]

yes, it is rampant. thanks.