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Anonymous
12-01-2004, 07:48 PM
Dear teacher,
please correct and suggest the better ones!

The customer C who intended to order GH 201, would like to ask if you have any way in order that he could receive 30 pcs of GH 201 and 30 pcs of GH 201B earlier than Dec 25th.
He suggested we could express to him by post, because his customers has needed them urgent. I told to him that it was sure the prices would be higher. And he wanted to know what those high prices are and on what date he can receive a total of 60 pcs GH 201+GH 201B.

Thanks a lot

Rusty
12-02-2004, 01:07 PM
Dear teacher,
please correct and suggest the better ones!

The customer C who intended to order GH 201, would like to ask if you have any way in order that he could receive 30 pcs of GH 201 and 30 pcs of GH 201B earlier than Dec 25th.
He suggested we could express to him by post, because his customers has needed them urgent. I told to him that it was sure the prices would be higher. And he wanted to know what those high prices are and on what date he can receive a total of 60 pcs GH 201+GH 201B.

Thanks a lot

please correct and suggest the better ones!

The customer C who intended to order GH 201, would like to ask if <strike>you have</strike> there is any way <strike>in order</strike> that he could receive 30 pcs of GH 201 and 30 pcs of GH 201B earlier than Dec 25th.
He suggested we could express them to him by post, because his customers <strike>has</strike> need <strike>ed</strike> them urgently. I told <strike>to</strike> him that it was <strike>sure</strike> certain that the prices would be higher. And he wants to know what those high prices are and on what date he can receive a total of 60 pcs GH 201+GH 201B.