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Anonymous
01-04-2005, 05:07 PM
Dear teacher,

Are the following sentences natural?

1)After 3 years not seeing together, now I know that I have not loved her as I did before.
2)He had presented her his diary before she came back to Philippine.
3)She promised that sometimes she would write email to me, but for me it's not important as it was before.
4)If someone loves you very much, you should know to consider/respect that love, because that/it will not happen as the same like that one more time.
5)And when you love somebody, Love much as you can because that love will happen in your heart as the same like that one more time.


Thanks a lot

Rusty
01-05-2005, 04:55 PM
Dear teacher,

Are the following sentences natural?

1)After 3 years not seeing together, now I know that I have not loved her as I did before.
2)He had presented her his diary before she came back to Philippine.
3)She promised that sometimes she would write email to me, but for me it's not important as it was before.
4)If someone loves you very much, you should know to consider/respect that love, because that/it will not happen as the same like that one more time.
5)And when you love somebody, Love much as you can because that love will happen in your heart as the same like that one more time.


Thanks a lot

1)After 3 years not seeing each other/being together, now I know that I do not love her as I did before.
2)He had presented her his diary before she came back to the Philippines.
3)She promised that sometimes she would write emails to me, but for me it's not as important as it was before.
4)If someone loves you very much, you should <strike>know to</strike> consider/respect that love,

because that/it will not happen as the same like that one more time.
Suggestion: …because it will not happen like that again.

5)And when you love somebody, love as much as you can because

that love will happen in your heart as the same like that one more time. I am uncertain of what you want to say.