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[Anonymous]

Hello,
Could you please proofread the following text for me, please.

Today many doors close before you or you can’t find what you want behind them. Don’t hold your curiosity! The doors of Minon are always open and expect you. Fashion is changeable, unstable reflection of ourselves as well as of the time we live in. they are able to reveal our advantages, wishes and liberalism. We would like to turn buying process from a boring and tiring action into a pleasant and memorable occasion. It is not important only to buy what you want. The act of buying itself must be exciting and to bring pleasure. We are trying to persuade all visitors that they are always welcome and that they can always rely on our hospitality no matter whether they come to shop or just to spend a few minutes with us away from the every-day life. Direct importers of fabrics and most sewing materials, wedding invitations, shoes and accessories help us maintain lower prices than that of similar goods in similar shops. Our stores are directly connected with fashion workshops, which help us react quickly if any corrections according to the clients’ wishes are needed. “Minon” Fashion House has appropriate fabrics for wedding dresses and evening gowns and wants to emphasize your charm and fascination when you order a dress.

I hope I don't bother you too much.
Thanks a lot.

[Anonymous]

Hello,
Could you please proofread the following text for me, please.

Today many doors close before you can find what you want behind them. Don’t hold your curiosity! The doors of Minon are always open and expect you.

Fashion is changeable, an unstable reflection of ourselves as well as of the time we live in, and able to reveal our advantages, wishes and liberalism.

We would like to turn buying process from a boring and tiring action into a pleasant and memorable occasion. It is not important only to buy what you want. The act of buying itself must be exciting and pleasant.

We are trying to persuade all visitors that they are always welcome and that they can always rely on our hospitality no matter whether they come to shop or just to spend a few minutes with us away from every-day life. Direct importers of fabrics and most sewing materials, wedding invitations, shoes and accessories help us maintain lower prices than similar shops. Our stores are directly connected with fashion workshops, which help us react quickly if any corrections complying to our clients’ wishes are needed.

“Minon” Fashion House has appropriate fabrics for wedding dresses and evening gowns and wants to emphasize your charm and fascination when you order a dress.

I hope I don't bother you too much.
Thanks a lot.

[Rusty]

Hello,
Could you please proofread the following text for me, please.

Today many doors close before you or you can’t find what you want behind them. Don’t hold your curiosity! The doors of Minon are always open and expect you. Fashion is changeable, unstable reflection of ourselves as well as of the time we live in. they are able to reveal our advantages, wishes and liberalism. We would like to turn buying process from a boring and tiring action into a pleasant and memorable occasion. It is not important only to buy what you want. The act of buying itself must be exciting and to bring pleasure. We are trying to persuade all visitors that they are always welcome and that they can always rely on our hospitality no matter whether they come to shop or just to spend a few minutes with us away from the every-day life. Direct importers of fabrics and most sewing materials, wedding invitations, shoes and accessories help us maintain lower prices than that of similar goods in similar shops. Our stores are directly connected with fashion workshops, which help us react quickly if any corrections according to the clients’ wishes are needed. “Minon” Fashion House has appropriate fabrics for wedding dresses and evening gowns and wants to emphasize your charm and fascination when you order a dress.

I hope I don't bother you too much.
Thanks a lot.

Today many doors close before you, or you can’t find what you want behind them. Don’t hold your curiosity! Suggestion: Don't suppress your curiosity!The doors of Minon are always open and expect you. Fashion is a changeable, unstable reflection of ourselves, as well as of the time we live in. they are able to reveal our advantages, wishes and liberalism. Does "they" refer to "fashion"? If so, change "they" to "it is." If "they" refers to "doors," change "they" to "The doors of Minon."We would like to turn the buying process from a boring and tiring action into a pleasant and memorable occasion. It is not important only to buy what you want. Suggestion: Change this to a positive statement. Example: It is important, not only to buy what you want, but the act of buying must be exciting…etc.The act of buying itself must be exciting and to bring pleasure. We are trying to persuade all visitors that they are always welcome and that they can always rely on our hospitality no matter whether they come to shop or just to spend a few minutes with us away from <strike>the</strike> everyday life. Direct importers of fabrics and most sewing materials, wedding invitations, shoes and accessories help us maintain lower prices than that of similar goods in similar shops. Our stores are directly connected with fashion workshops which help us react quickly if any corrections according to the clients’ wishes are needed. I am not sure whether the verb should be help or helps. You need to decide: 1) the fact that our stores have a connection helps us
2) the workshops help us “Minon” Fashion House has appropriate fabrics for wedding dresses and evening gowns and wants to emphasize your charm and fascination when you order a dress.