PDA

View Full Version : Please correct


Anonymous
02-04-2005, 08:18 AM
Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.


I am sorry for replying late. I were so busy.
It is the last day I work before am on Tet holiday(Tet means lunar new year). I will have one week free and enyoy Tet with my family in A province.
I am so happy if I will be able to intend your english club. And I will be very happy if I can share you in organization. I am only afraid that I don't have time. Because I work at the company from 8:00AM to 5:00 PM everyday from Monday to Saturday. And I am teaching Nowegian 3 nights a week from 6:30 to 8:30P.M. I am so busy, am not I? Every saturday night I have to come home in A province and will come back to Saigon on Sunday.

But I am very interested in your english club. Please give me your full project on my company's address: ............ The receiver's name: ..........

Her are some greeting sentences in Norwegian:


God morgen! = Good morning

God natt!= Good night.

Hvordan har du det? =How are you?

I think it is not so difficult to come to Norway. The most important is that you need someone in a good condition on finance, who acts as guarantee for you and if you are married, it is O.K. Those whom I am teaching Norwegian will fix home there. And that is the reason they are learning Norwegian.

Tet is coming. This year is the time one I wellcome Tet in VN. It doesn't look like sad and cold and cheerless Tet in Norway.



I wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR

Thanks a lot

Rusty
02-04-2005, 11:07 AM
Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.


I am sorry for replying late. I were so busy.
It is the last day I work before am on Tet holiday(Tet means lunar new year). I will have one week free and enyoy Tet with my family in A province.
I am so happy if I will be able to intend your english club. And I will be very happy if I can share you in organization. I am only afraid that I don't have time. Because I work at the company from 8:00AM to 5:00 PM everyday from Monday to Saturday. And I am teaching Nowegian 3 nights a week from 6:30 to 8:30P.M. I am so busy, am not I? Every saturday night I have to come home in A province and will come back to Saigon on Sunday.

But I am very interested in your english club. Please give me your full project on my company's address: ............ The receiver's name: ..........

Her are some greeting sentences in Norwegian:


God morgen! = Good morning

God natt!= Good night.

Hvordan har du det? =How are you?

I think it is not so difficult to come to Norway. The most important is that you need someone in a good condition on finance, who acts as guarantee for you and if you are married, it is O.K. Those whom I am teaching Norwegian will fix home there. And that is the reason they are learning Norwegian.

Tet is coming. This year is the time one I wellcome Tet in VN. It doesn't look like sad and cold and cheerless Tet in Norway.



I wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR

Thanks a lot


I am sorry for replying late. I <strike>were</strike> have been so busy.
<strike>It</strike> This is the last day I work before I am on Tet holiday(Tet means lunar new year). I will have one week free and enyoy Tet with my family in A province.

I <strike>am</strike> would be so happy if I <strike>will be able to</strike> could <strike>intend</strike> attend your English club.
And I <strike>will</strike> would be very happy if I <strike>can</strike> could share <strike>you</strike> in your organization.

Only,I am <strike>only</strike> afraid that I don't have time, because I work at the company from 8:00AM to 5:00 PM every day from Monday to Saturday. And I am teaching Nowegian 3 nights a week from 6:30 to 8:30P.M. I am <strike>so</strike> busy, am I not <strike>not I</strike>? Every Saturday night I have to come home to A province and <strike>will</strike> come back to Saigon on Sunday.

But I am very interested in your English club. Please give me your full project on my company's address: ............ The receiver's name: ..........
Here are some greeting sentences in Norwegian:
God morgen! = Good morning
God natt!= Good night.
Hvordan har du det? =How are you?

I think it is not so difficult to <strike>come</strike> go to Norway. The most important thing is that you need someone in a good financial condition <strike>on finance,</strike> who acts as guarantor for you, and if you are married, it is O.K. Those whom I am teaching Norwegian will <strike>fix</strike> make/establish/find a home there. And that is the reason they are learning Norwegian.

Tet is coming. This year <strike>is the time one</strike> I welcome Tet in VN.
(This year is one time that I will welcome Tet in VN.
This is the first time I will welcome Tet in VN).
It doesn't look like sad and cold and cheerless Tet in Norway.

I wish you HAPPY NEW YEAR