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AB
03-06-2005, 02:28 PM
Dear teacher,

Please correct and suggest the following prays better.

My Lord,
Please increase the belief in us in oder that we realize your love’s marvellousness that are allways done in the life of every body daily.

Thanks a lot

Rusty
03-06-2005, 04:44 PM
Dear teacher,

Please correct and suggest the following prays better.

My Lord,
Please increase the belief in us in oder that we realize your love’s marvellousness that are allways done in the life of every body daily.

Thanks a lot

My Lord,
Please increase the belief in us in order that we realize your love’s marvellousness that are always done in the life of every body daily.
(Marvellousness is uncommon, although my dictionary lists it as British.
Suggestion: Please increase belief in us in order that we realize the marvels of your love that are performed daily in each of our lives).