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[AB]

Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.

Pray to Mother Maria,
Mother stands still there, next to your dear Child, in order to, together with your Child, rescue for who are guilty. Please always stand next to the lives of each of us in every challenge in order that we are always courageous, not discouraged, disappointed. Amen

Thanks a lot

[Rusty]

Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.

Pray to Mother Maria,
Mother stands still there, next to your dear Child, in order to, together with your Child, rescue for who are guilty. Please always stand next to the lives of each of us in every challenge in order that we are always courageous, not discouraged, disappointed. Amen

Thanks a lot

Pray to Mother Maria,
Mother stands still there, (If you want this to be a request, say stand instead of stands).

next to your dear Child, in order to, together with your Child, rescue <strike>for</strike> those who are guilty. Please always stand next to the lives of each of us in every challenge in order that we <strike>are</strike> will/may always be courageous, not discouraged, or disappointed. Amen

[Pete]

Just an additional comment--

If you are referring to the mother of Jesus, the name generally used in English is Mary, not Maria.