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AB
03-10-2005, 02:24 PM
Dear teacher,
Please correct.

1)Wish/May many happiness and cheerful in this special day.
2)That is really difficult for you, however you can try it.
3)I think there are some wrongs with Website VOAnews.com, I can't hear news on it as I did.
4)Is it the last day we study each others to day?
5)How long did it take that you could be used to live in Norway?
6)Does it take more 24 hours to take a flight to Norway?
7)One/People must to sacrifice something to have/reach something they want to.

Thanks a lot

Rusty
03-10-2005, 04:17 PM
Dear teacher,
Please correct.

1)Wish/May many happiness and cheerful in this special day.
2)That is really difficult for you, however you can try it.
3)I think there are some wrongs with Website VOAnews.com, I can't hear news on it as I did.
4)Is it the last day we study each others to day?
5)How long did it take that you could be used to live in Norway?
6)Does it take more 24 hours to take a flight to Norway?
7)One/People must to sacrifice something to have/reach something they want to.

Thanks a lot

1)Wish/May many happiness and cheerful in this special day.
(I wish you much happiness and cheer on this special day.
May much happiness and cheer be yours on this special day).

2)That is really difficult for you, however you can try it. (OK).
3)I think there <strike>are some wrongs</strike> is something wrong with Website VOAnews.com, I can't hear news on it as I did.
4)Is it the last day we study each others to day? (No).
(I am not sure what you mean by "each others."
Is today the last day we study __________?)
5)How long did it take <strike>that you could be</strike> you to get used to living in Norway?
6)Does it take more 24 hours to take a flight to Norway? (No).
Does it take more than 24 hours to fly to Norway?
7)<strike>One/</strike>People must <strike>to</strike> sacrifice something to have/reach something they want <strike>to</strike>.
A person must sacrifice something to have/reach something he/she wants.
One must sacrifice something to have/reach something one wants. (Formal).