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[AB]

Dear teacher,
Pleaase correct and suggest the better ones

More than 2000 years, the congregation has been present and invited everybody to discover Lord’s love and the authentic value of man/people. Please help us know how to open our soul large and please open our eyes in order that we see always Lord in every circumstance in order to howto listen to, to respect and to do something You/Lord wants. Amen.

Thanks a lot

[Pete]

Dear teacher,
Pleaase correct and suggest the better ones

More than 2000 years, the congregation has been present and invited everybody to discover Lord’s love and the authentic value of man/people. Please help us know how to open our soul large and please open our eyes in order that we see always Lord in every circumstance in order to howto listen to, to respect and to do something You/Lord wants. Amen.

Thanks a lot
For more than 2000 years, the <strike>congregation</strike> church has been present and has invited everybody to discover Lord’s love and the <strike>authentic</strike> true authentic is wrong, but true sounds more natural to me.] value of man/people. Please help us know how to <u>open our soul large</u> [The phrase "open one's soul (large)" doesn't mean anything to me; I can't tell what you are trying to express. You "open your heart" in order to become more receptive to other people and to extended love.] and please open our eyes in order that we <strike>see always</strike> always see the Lord in every circumstance in order to <strike>howto</strike> listen to, to respect and to do something You/Lord wants. Amen.

-- The last sentence is confusing; it doesn't seem to follow that one should see something in order to listen to it.

-- Another confusion about this paragraph as a whole is that it begins as an essay, using "Lord" in the third person, but it ends as though it is meant to be a prayer.