correct new place

[Pearl]

Hello,



This is part of a letter you receive from an English friend.

In your last letter you mentioned that you had moved. Tell me about your new place. Is it different from the old house? How is the area?


My writting

Dear Soso,

How are you? I hope you are well and every thing is ok with you.

Last month, I had moved an new house in the Ajman city behind street. It is beautiful house. There are 4 bedrooms and there are 5 bathrooms. Also , there are 2 living rooms and 2 kitchens one inside house and other out of the house. Also, There is one big garden with swing and small swimming pool.

Of course, it’s different because the old one has just 2 bedrooms and one bathrooms and small living room with out garden.

So, I like my new house because it’s big than small house and my new house near the city and shopping.

I’m looking forward to writing as soon as if possible.

Best wishes,
Pearl

[Rusty]

Hello,

This is part of a letter you receive from an English friend.

In your last letter you mentioned that you had moved. Tell me about your new place. Is it different from the old house? How is the area?

My writting

Dear Soso,

How are you? I hope you are well and every thing is ok with you.

Last month, I had moved an new house in the Ajman city behind street. It is beautiful house. There are 4 bedrooms and there are 5 bathrooms. Also , there are 2 living rooms and 2 kitchens one inside house and other out of the house. Also, There is one big garden with swing and small swimming pool.

Of course, it’s different because the old one has just 2 bedrooms and one bathrooms and small living room with out garden.

So, I like my new house because it’s big than small house and my new house near the city and shopping.

I’m looking forward to writing as soon as if possible.

Best wishes,
Pearl


My writing writting

Dear Soso,

How are you? I hope you are well and every thing is ok with you. (Everything is one word).

Last month, I <strike>had</strike> moved to a new house in <strike>the</strike> Ajman City <strike>behind street</strike>. (Perhaps you mean "the outskirts of Ajman City").
It is a beautiful house. There are 4 bedrooms and there are 5 bathrooms. Also, there are 2 living rooms and 2 kitchens: one inside the house and the other out of the house. Also, there is one big garden with a swing and a small swimming pool.

Of course, it’s different because the old one had just 2 bedrooms and one bathroom <strike>s</strike> and small living room without garden. (Without is one word).

So, I like my new house because it’s bigger than the small house and my new house is near the city and shopping.

I’m looking forward to writing as soon as if possible. (Look at the corrections I made to this line on your previous letters).

Best wishes,
Pearl