mk
06-05-2005, 07:35 AM
Dear Pete,
Thanks for your help. This time, I wrote a composition about my school. I think there are many mistakes. But I don’t know how to correct them. Could you please help me correct it.
Thank you very much,
Mk
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My school
I have been studying Japanese in this school for near three years. The course will finish in this summer. That means I don’t need to walk twenty minutes for going to school in Sundays in coming July.
The school is called “ABCs School” and in the downtown. There is a main road in front of the building. On the left hand side, there is a Catholic Church. On Sundays, a lot of Romanist goes to that church. The school is a seven-storied house. The lower the three levels is a public hall. The upper levels are the classrooms. There are two classrooms on each level. Our classroom is in level 7. We need to take the lift to be there. If the lift has problem, we should use the stair to get to the level 7. The classroom is not too big. It has 30 seats. A huge air-conditioner is hanged on the ceiling. If the air-conditioner is turned on, even the temperature is set in 24 degrees, the room temperature will decrease beyond the setting very fast then we need to request our teacher to turn it off.
On Sundays, I get off the train and walk along the main road to the school. It takes almost twenty minutes walk. The road is very crowed, a lot of vehicles running on the road. It causes much noise and makes the air dirty. But on the roadside, there are a lot of trees. In the summer, the trees grow some flowers. We can smell the flowers on the road.
Thanks for your help. This time, I wrote a composition about my school. I think there are many mistakes. But I don’t know how to correct them. Could you please help me correct it.
Thank you very much,
Mk
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My school
I have been studying Japanese in this school for near three years. The course will finish in this summer. That means I don’t need to walk twenty minutes for going to school in Sundays in coming July.
The school is called “ABCs School” and in the downtown. There is a main road in front of the building. On the left hand side, there is a Catholic Church. On Sundays, a lot of Romanist goes to that church. The school is a seven-storied house. The lower the three levels is a public hall. The upper levels are the classrooms. There are two classrooms on each level. Our classroom is in level 7. We need to take the lift to be there. If the lift has problem, we should use the stair to get to the level 7. The classroom is not too big. It has 30 seats. A huge air-conditioner is hanged on the ceiling. If the air-conditioner is turned on, even the temperature is set in 24 degrees, the room temperature will decrease beyond the setting very fast then we need to request our teacher to turn it off.
On Sundays, I get off the train and walk along the main road to the school. It takes almost twenty minutes walk. The road is very crowed, a lot of vehicles running on the road. It causes much noise and makes the air dirty. But on the roadside, there are a lot of trees. In the summer, the trees grow some flowers. We can smell the flowers on the road.