Please correct

[AB]

Dear teacher,

Please correct and suggest the better ones.

In order to not take much time and in order that the research/understanding the documents and the way to learn French online effectly, I attache you some address of Website.
Try them before and note something you don’t understand down a paper. We will discuss about the problems when I come your place/house next time.
Please pay attention:
Only using the pointing mouse to click into any address of Website that you want to go to. It means that it isn't necessary to type the whole of a long address into the box of address on the Tool bar.

Thanks a lot

[Pete]

In order to not take much time and in order that the research/understanding the documents and the way to learn French online effectly, I attache you some address of Website.
Instead of the previous sentence, try:
-In order to save time, I am attaching the addresses of some Websites that can help you to understand the documents and to learn French on line.
Try them before we get together and note <strike>something</strike> anything you don’t understand down <strike>a</strike> on paper. We will discuss <strike>about</strike> the problems when I come to your place/house next time.
Please <strike>pay attention</strike> note the following:
<strike>Only using</strike> You only need to use the <strike>pointing mouse</strike> mouse pointer to click <strike>into</strike> on any Website address <strike>of Website</strike> that you want to go to. <strike>It</strike> This means that it isn't necessary to type the whole <strike>of a</strike> long address into the address box <strike>of address</strike> on the Tool bar.