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[Anonymous]

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1.I really trust you so please don't start to doubt me that I am doubting you.Doubts, over possesiveness, ego,angry, inferiority complex, superiority complex etc ,I really hate all these things.I swear, these words are not in my dictionary/lexicon.

2. I used to fear to talk with people esspecially when I meet first, now I am much better than before.At times, still I don't feel comfortable but now I have the confidence that I will be o.k by the time I finish my course.This is also one of the reasons that I chose MBA because we must partipicate in presentation, discussions etc which help me to lessen( any other word) the fear.At first I joined for MS in computer science and even attend a class but later when I came to know that it will take 2 years to complete I changed to MBA.Shall I join for MS after finishing MBA??

Thanks in advance

[Pete]

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1. I really trust you so please don't start to doubt me, thinking that I am doubting you. Doubts over possessiveness, ego, anger, feelings of inferiority or superiority, etc.-- I really hate all these things. I swear, these words are not in my dictionary/lexicon. [Ok.]

2. I used to fear to talk with people, especially when I first met them; now I am much better than before. At times I still don't feel comfortable, but now I have the confidence that I will be o.k by the time I finish my course. This is also one of the reasons that I chose MBA, because we must participate in presentations, discussions, etc., which help me to [lessen( any other word) the] diminish my fear. At first I [joined] enrolled for an MS in computer science and even attended a class, but later when I came to know that it [will] would take 2 years to complete, I changed to MBA. [Shall] Should I [join] enroll for an MS after finishing my MBA??

[Rusty]

1.I really trust you so please don't start to tell me that I am doubting you.
Doubts, over possessiveness, ego, anger, inferiority complex, superiority complex, etc.: I really hate all these things. I swear, these words are not in my dictionary/lexicon.

2. I used to fear/be afraid to talk with people, especially when I first met them. Now I am much better than before. At times, I still don't feel comfortable, but now I have the confidence that I will be OK by the time I finish my course. This is also one of the reasons that I chose MBA because we must partipicate in presentation, discussions, etc. which help me to lessen (lessen is OK. any other word -- reduce) the fear. At first I enrolled for an MS in computer science and even attended a class, but later when I came to know/found out that it would take 2 years to complete I changed to MBA. Shall I enroll for MS after finishing MBA??