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ren
07-16-2005, 09:13 AM
please correct and sugest better ones..

I am feeling o.k now. Temperature has come down to normal. Hence I will be there on Tuesday morning at 9.45 am. I am sorry to tell you that I am unable to fulfil(any other word) the request you made. I admit Indian Airlines operates flights daily to Cochin but it departs at 00.05 hours and arrives at 9.45am. If I win any lottery enough to own an airline company, I will definitely fly in special flight that arrives before 7am or after 8pm. Unfortunately Indian airlines is neither owned by my father nor they are operating any flight that arrives at cochin before 7am or after 8pm. If you can arrange my ticket in any other airlines that arrives at Cochin either before 7am or after 8pm, I am ready to travel in it, can you?

thanks

Pete
07-16-2005, 05:13 PM
please correct and sugest better ones..

I am feeling o.k now. Temperature has come down to normal. Hence I will be there on Tuesday morning at 9.45 am. I am sorry to tell you that I am unable to fulfil(any other word) the request you made. I admit Indian Airlines operates flights daily to Cochin but it departs at 00.05 hours and arrives at 9.45am. If I win any lottery enough to own an airline company, I will definitely fly in special flight that arrives before 7am or after 8pm. Unfortunately Indian airlines is neither owned by my father nor they are operating any flight that arrives at cochin before 7am or after 8pm. If you can arrange my ticket in any other airlines that arrives at Cochin either before 7am or after 8pm, I am ready to travel in it, can you?

thanks
I am feeling <strike>o.k</strike> OK or O.K. now. My temperature has come down to normal. Hence I will be there on Tuesday morning at 9.45 am. I am sorry to tell you that I am unable to fulfill (any other word ["comply with" would work]) the request you made. I admit Indian Airlines operates flights daily to Cochin but it departs at 00.05 hours and arrives at 9.45am. If I win any lottery enough to own an airline company, I will definitely fly in special flight that arrives before 7am or after 8pm. Unfortunately Indian airlines is neither owned by my father nor they are operating any flight that arrives at Cochin before 7am or after 8pm. If you can arrange my ticket <strike>in</strike> with any other airline<strike>s</strike> that arrives at Cochin either before 7am or after 8pm, I am ready to travel in it; can you?