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patp
09-11-2005, 10:30 AM
Hi,

I am writing moral for one fable. please correct the sentences for that.

1) Whatever is in your destiny, you can't avoid that.
2) Whatever is in your destiny, you have to face that. You can't avoid by any way/ by doing any efforts.


Thanks a lot.
pat

Pete
09-11-2005, 11:13 AM
Hi,

I am writing moral for one fable. please correct the sentences for that.

1) Whatever is in your destiny, you can't avoid that.
2) Whatever is in your destiny, you have to face that. You can't avoid by any way/ by doing any efforts.


Thanks a lot.
pat
Here are my suggestions:

1) Whatever is in your destiny, you can't avoid that it.
2) Whatever is in your destiny, you have to face that (it). You can't avoid it by any way/ by doing any efforts of your own.

The sentences might be a little less awkward as ordinary conditional sentences:
- If something is in your destiny, … it.

Fine Tree
09-25-2005, 04:25 AM
How about this sentence? Is it OK
- Whatever your destiny is, you can't avoid it.

Thanks in advance.

Pete
09-26-2005, 09:47 AM
How about this sentence? Is it OK
- Whatever your destiny is, you can't avoid it.

Thanks in advance.
Yes, I think that is fine.