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navi
10-24-2005, 02:58 AM
Which is correct:

1-The joy that you have come back is great.
2-The joy of your coming back is great.

3-I cried because of the sorrow that he had died.
4-I cried because of the sorrow of his death.

Rusty
10-25-2005, 12:55 PM
Which is correct:

1-The joy that you have come back is great.
2-The joy of your coming back is great.
3-I cried because of the sorrow that he had died.
4-I cried because of the sorrow of his death.

1-The joy that you have come back is great. (Unnatural).
2-The joy of your coming back is great. (I don't think this says what you want to say. Whose joy is it?)

3-I cried because of the sorrow that he had died. (Unnatural).
4-I cried because of the sorrow of his death. (OK)
. 4-2 I cried from sorrow because of his death. (Natural.)

navi
10-25-2005, 01:29 PM
Thanks a lot Rusty,

Actually in number 2 we are not supposed to know whose joy it is. It might be mine, or ours, or yours, etc.
2-"The joy of your coming back."
is supposed to mean:
"The joy created by your coming back."
But I am not sure that 2 is correct.

Are these ones correct:
5-My joy that you have come back is great.
6-My joy is great that you have come back.