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himani patterson
10-26-2005, 02:00 AM
Dear Sir
can you please proof read the below paragraph again.


I was watching a family movie called "meri bhabhi." story was based on a family of two brothers who lived together happily and one day younger brother's wife got pregnant. at the same time his bhabhi got injured by falling down from upstairs and doctor declared her in critical condition as she was also pregnant but the doctor couldn't save the baby who had already died inside her. now, she might not be in the condition to tolerate this all incident. other side younger brother's wife gave birth to a baby boy.her husband told her that she needs to give her baby to bhabhi to save her. at last she got ready to give up her baby and never told anybody about the whole incidence. they did this all for the well being of others.
Pete
10-26-2005, 08:18 PM
Dear Sir
can you please proof read the below paragraph again.


I was watching a family movie called "meri bhabhi." story was based on a family of two brothers who lived together happily and one day younger brother's wife got pregnant. at the same time his bhabhi got injured by falling down from upstairs and doctor declared her in critical condition as she was also pregnant but the doctor couldn't save the baby who had already died inside her. now, she might not be in the condition to tolerate this all incident. other side younger brother's wife gave birth to a baby boy.her husband told her that she needs to give her baby to bhabhi to save her. at last she got ready to give up her baby and never told anybody about the whole incidence. they did this all for the well being of others.
Please try a little harder before you pass work like this to us to correct. Make sure each sentence begins with an uppercase letter. Look at your nouns, and if the noun doesn't have some other determiner (artticle, possessive), add one (like "the") unless you have a good reason not to use it. Do these things and submit that to us as a reply. Then we'll try to offer corrections if they are needed. By the way, what is "his bhabhi"? That certainly isn't an English word.