please proofread sentences

[patp]

Hi Everybody,

1)Art history is my first art class. I am really enjoying this class.

2)When I selected this class, I wasn’t sure that what I was going to study in this class.

3)However, this class helped me to bring out my hidden interest of art.

4)Many times I visited historical places, but I never looked at the work of art by architectural or artistic view.

5)Now I came to know that if people know the meaning of a building and sculpture, the interest peaks itself and the building becomes part of our conscious.

6)It is really an interesting subject. It helped me to gain the worldly knowledge.

7)It didn’t only help me to gain knowledge of art history but also knowledge of history.

8)I was fairly unfamiliar with famous architects.

9)Now I can confidently explain anybody the world’s famous artists and their great and astonishing contributions to art history.

10)After studying art history, I came to this point that understanding art provides key insights into understanding human condition.

[Temico]

1)Art history is my first art class. I am really enjoying this class. (correct)

2)When I selected this class, I wasn’t sure that what I was going to study in this class.

3)However, this class helped me to bring out my hidden interest of in art.

4)Many times I visited historical places, but I never looked at the work of art but was engrossed with the architectural or artistic view.

5)Now I came have come to know that if people know knew the meaning of a building and sculpture, the interest would peak itself and the building would becomes part of our consciousness.

6)It is really an interesting subject. It helped me gain the worldly knowledge.

7)It didn’t only help me gain knowledge of art history but also the knowledge of history.

8)I was fairly unfamiliar with famous architects.

9)Now I can confidently explain to anybody some/all of the world’s famous artists and their great and astonishing contributions to art history.

10)After studying art history, I have come came to this the point that understanding art provides key insights into in understanding human condition.

[daya]

I would ask that a native speaker review the corrections. I would like to use the sentences as examples but I need to know if a native speaker will think they are correct.

Thank you in advance.

Daya

[danmahaffey]

I would ask that a native speaker review the corrections. I would like to use the sentences as examples but I need to know if a native speaker will think they are correct.

Thank you in advance.

DayaMy pleasure:

1)Art History is my first art class. I am really enjoying this class.

2)When I selected this class, I wasn’t sure that what I was going to study in this class.

3)However, this class helped me (to) bring out my hidden interest of in art. ( ) = optional

4)Many times I visited historical places, but I never looked at the work of as art by from an architectural or artistic view. I think you mean that you never saw the buildings as art before--just as buildings.

5)Now I came have come to know that if people know the meaning of a building and sculpture, the (or our) interest peaks by itself and the building becomes part of our consciousness.

6)It is really an interesting subject. It helped me to gain the worldlygreater knowledge of the world.

7)It didn’t not only helped me (to) gain knowledge of art history but also knowledge of history.

8)I was fairly unfamiliar with famous architects.

9)Now I can confidently explain to anybody the world’s famous artists and their great and astonishing contributions to art history.

10)After studying art history, I came to this point thathave come to the point of understanding that art provides key insights into understanding the human condition.


By the way, those are terrific thoughts, and I like the way you put the ideas together.

[Temico]

My pleasure:

1)Art History is my first art class. I am really enjoying this class.

2)When I selected this class, I wasn’t sure that what I was going to study in this class.

3)However, this class helped me (to) bring out my hidden interest of in art. ( ) = optional

4)Many times I visited historical places, but I never looked at the work of as art by from an architectural or artistic view. I think you mean that you never saw the buildings as art before--just as buildings.

5)Now I came have come to know that if people know the meaning of a building and sculpture, the (or our) interest peaks by itself and the building becomes part of our consciousness.

6)It is really an interesting subject. It helped me to gain the worldlygreater knowledge of the world.

7)It didn’t not only helped me (to) gain knowledge of art history but also knowledge of history.

8)I was fairly unfamiliar with famous architects.

9)Now I can confidently explain to anybody the world’s famous artists and their great and astonishing contributions to art history.

10)After studying art history, I came to this point thathave come to the point of understanding that art provides key insights into understanding the human condition.


By the way, those are terrific thoughts, and I like the way you put the ideas together.

BTW, you still haven't answered "daya's" question!

[daya]

Thank you for your hard work danmahaffey. You are very generous to give your time. :D

Daya