Does it sound natural ?

[liuchunsheng123456]

the man not only had had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well .
the man had not only had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well.
not only had the man had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well.
not only the man had had an uncomfortable trip , but was very hungry as well.


we shall not only see the Games but also visit many parts of the country .

[Rusty]

the man not only had had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well .
the man had not only had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well.
not only had the man had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well.
not only the man had had an uncomfortable trip , but was very hungry as well.


we shall not only see the Games but also visit many parts of the country .
the man not only had had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well . (OK).
the man had not only had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well. (OK).
not only had the man had an uncomfortable trip ,but was very hungry as well. (OK).
not only the man had had an uncomfortable trip , but was very hungry as well. (No).

we shall not only see the Games but also visit many parts of the country. (OK).

[liuchunsheng123456]

thank you very much .