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[Anonymous]

The perfect weekend

I just got back from spending three gorgeous days at Hawar Island with my life long good buddy Ahmed, we've hung out together since we were kids and with some other friends, so we planned a little get –away –just us guys, no wives .we took my boat and motored out of the marine club towards the open sea, under a blue sky. The weather was absolutely perfect. We take two hours to arrive to the island. Arriving to the island the sea shimmers an incredible brilliant blue the air smells so pure and clean. We came to the island and we take our luggage to the beach cabin, and we take rest then we went for a walk on hawar beach. Talking, laughing, and telling tales of our lives. We soak up some sun and swim in the sea and after that we take our boat little far for fishing and we caught dozen of shaary (kind of fish). The smallest was about 12inches long .Most of the shaary was about 14 to 16 inches we enjoyed that day very will. And at night we cooked these catching fishes. That was on Thursday on Friday morning we spend the day on the beach until the afternoon.
By Friday night we all arrived back home in time to get a good nights rest before the start of a new week, and thanking God for this perfect weekend.
thank you in advance and APPRECIATE that to you my best teacher.

[Rusty]

The perfect weekend

I just got back from spending three gorgeous days at Hawar Island with my lifelong good buddy Ahmed. We've hung out together since we were kids, and with some other friends, so we planned a little getaway -– just us guys, no wives. We took my boat and motored out of the marine club towards the open sea, under a blue sky. The weather was absolutely perfect. We took two hours to arrive at the island. Arriving at the island, the sea shimmered an incredible brilliant blue, the air smelled so pure and clean. We came to the island and we took our luggage to the beach cabin, and we took a rest, then we went for a walk on Hawar Beach, talking, laughing, and telling tales of our lives. We soaked up some sun and swam in the sea and after that we took our boat a little farther/a little way for fishing and we caught a dozen <strike>of</strike> shaary (kind of fish).
The smallest was about 12 inches long. Most of the shaary were about 14 to 16 inches. We enjoyed that day very much. And at night we cooked these <strike>catching</strike> fish we had caught. That was on Thursday. From Friday morning until the afternoon we spent the day on the beach.
By Friday night we all arrived back home in time to get a good night's rest before the start of a new week, and thanking God for this perfect weekend.