Carlagee
10-09-2006, 01:09 PM
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Ms. Jean Jackson
735 W. 79th Street
Detroit, MI 14728
Dear Ms. Jackson,
I want to enter my antique ford Betsy in the Rally of the Americas to be held August 12, 1994. Please send me any information I may need to register. I understand you only accept seventy five entries, am I to late ? I was told to wait until May to inquire so I hope there are still openings.
A friend who has entered in the past said this is the best rally of the whole year. I’m excited about entering, My car is a 1910 classic in excellent condition. It has won numerous awards over the years and it is not ready to retire. My wife and I are looking forward to the drive from our home in Arizona all the way to Detroit. We’re studying the book The Motor City in anticipation of our visit, I’ll be waiting to hear from you.
Ms. Jean Jackson
735 W. 79th Street
Detroit, MI 14728
Dear Ms. Jackson,
I want to enter my antique ford Betsy in the Rally of the Americas to be held August 12, 1994. Please send me any information I may need to register. I understand you only accept seventy five entries, am I to late ? I was told to wait until May to inquire so I hope there are still openings.
A friend who has entered in the past said this is the best rally of the whole year. I’m excited about entering, My car is a 1910 classic in excellent condition. It has won numerous awards over the years and it is not ready to retire. My wife and I are looking forward to the drive from our home in Arizona all the way to Detroit. We’re studying the book The Motor City in anticipation of our visit, I’ll be waiting to hear from you.