please correct

[Anonymous]

Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.

1)John, don’t push the door so hard. It might crack the glass door.
2)Who cracked my glasses?
3)Were you the one who put these thick books on my bag? Do you know if you cracked my glasses?
4)She only likes to eat yolk, not egg white.
5)You can use egg white to massage your face. It will help your complexion is good.
6)How would you like to eat egg? Soft-boiled or hard-boiled?
7)When I was a child, I used to shells to make my toys.

Thanks a lot

[Rusty]

1)John, don’t push the door so hard. It might crack the glass door. (OK).
2)Who cracked my glasses? (OK).
3)Were you the one who put these thick books on my bag? Do you know if you cracked my glasses? (OK).
4)She only likes to eat yolk, not egg white. (OK).
5)You can use egg white to massage your face. (OK).
It will help make your complexion <strike>is</strike> good.
(Better: It will help give you a good complexion).
6)How would you like to eat the/your egg? Soft-boiled or hard-boiled?
7)When I was a child, I used <strike>to</strike> shells to make my toys.