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[Anonymous]

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1.Don't compare me with other girls or the characters in films.I really hate that.If I compare you with others, how do you feel?Don't forget I too have a heart ,it also pains, moreover I am not a callous like you.

2.I don't desire or expect of anything which I don't deserve.But when you came into my life, I thought we are going to start a new life, that's what everybody told me and make convinced me to this marriage but you are just continuing your life as it was.

3.So you feel like I am nagging you.Let it be like that.As per your request I will never make any complaints to you.Neither will I ask you to love me wholeheartedly nor I will share with you my happiness or sorrow, infact now I understand there is no point in doing so with a person who doesn't want to give me even a droplet of love from the ocean of his heart.

thanks very much

[Rusty]

1.Don't compare me with other girls or the characters in films.I really hate that.If I compare you with others, how do you feel?Don't forget I too have a heart ,it also pains, moreover I am not a callous one/person like you.

2.I don't desire or expect <strike>of</strike> anything which I don't deserve.But when you came into my life, I thought we were going to start a new life, that's what everybody told me and <strike>make</strike> convinced me to undertake/enter/take on/commit to/ this marriage, but you are just continuing your life as it was.

3.So you feel like I am nagging you.Let it be like that.As per your request I will never make any complaints to you.Neither will I ask you to love me wholeheartedly, nor I will share with you my happiness or sorrow, in fact now I understand there is no point in doing so with a person who doesn't want to give me even a droplet of love from the ocean of his heart.
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